I honestly didn't mind his novel except the things I commented on and how the MC loves to see people in pain.

If he's going to revise and rewrite his novel then I don't mind using money to become a 'supporter' on patron again.

Otherwise, no. It just isn't worth my money to read a novel like that.

If Bai is reading this(Eh, Idc if you are) then I suggest:
1. Don't make the MC an idiot again

  1. Decent update stability - I don't care if you update everyday, at least stick to a schedule(That is if you made one, or you're just updating randomly. If it is the latter then I won't even spare this novel a glance)

  2. MC is boring..He just goes around rescuing beautiful maidens that just happen to be in danger, kills a few people, goes to a new place and then repeat. Make him more interesting..

  3. Don't repeat chapters. Meaning, don't make 5 chapters that are literally about drinking tea and nothing else except idle chit chatter. It's just....stupid

  4. The harem...So far, it's about 4-5 people(Up to chapter 72) and if you're going to add even more girls to the harem then this is just not going to cut it for me. I personally don't like harems but if I find the novel is good I try to just ignore it. But this novel already has 5 people in the harem in less than 80 chapters. I've read other novels that have 1-6 harems but the harem only grows to that size when it's at least over 400 chapters. At least make it 2 girls in the harem in the first 100 chapters..

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These are what I suggest should change, otherwise, there are plenty of other good novels in the world..

    Misguided_Rooster Lol, I have different opinion. One of the reasons I like to read his novel was because of his low EQ main character. This stupidity made it fresh for me.

    Smart and powerful MC would be too cruel to the opponent (could you give those arrogant young masters a chance? They won't last a paragraph with a smart MC.).

    People had their own preferences.

    Misguided_Rooster Heya, it’s his/her story and to be honest, readers don’t get to decide what happens to the story since it’s the author’s free will, creativity and it’s akin to a life. We don’t dictate another person’s life, do we? If you want that kind of story, you can be a writer yourself and I’m sure people will support you too👍🏻 But of course, while readers don’t decide, they do criticise and it is up to the author to decide if it is real criticism (which they might improve on or not) or just a reader’s personal preference to the story. The story is perfect the way it is now, then and in the future. It’s just up to you and I to decide if we want to read it or not. Perhaps this story isn’t your cup of tea, but I’m sure many others love the story the way it is currently. And I’m one of them:)

      If he has a lot of Patrons then it's unlikely that he'll return here. Also he wouldn't need to be anxious about the word count quota. I don't see any benefits for him to return here, honestly. Aside from the Advertisment for his novel, which he clearly achieved.

      • RB2C replied to this.

        AuHNG BaiSiWa. He/She is an author best known for the novel “Legend of the Perfect Emperor”🙆🏻‍♀️ You won’t be able to find it here now but there are plenty of sites that you still can read the novel from. (It is not completed though) But I really highly recommend you read it because even though it is depressing that we don’t get to read the full story yet, it is still a very wonderful experience to read his/her style of writing. Besides, the plot/idea for the novel is also very interesting. It is a really really really good story and super addictive. Just give it a try! And be sure to come back here and leave a reply #ReturnBai HAHAHA😂 Am I persuasive enough? (Not that good at languages, pardon me🙇🏻‍♀️)

          xxyurou I know I was just sharing what I thought what needed to be revised. I never said I hated the novel, just that there were somethings I personally thought could use some revision

            RB2C we can only step your dream down a notch, if you can't have Bai himself, there's Bot Bais across the internet with his novel. XD

              RB2C so here's the thing, bai wasn't removed, he went out, especially after getting the money...

              So you guys could do well change the title,

              It looks like you guys are saying that Webnovel wanted to remove bai.

              Just to make it clear.

              Bai left, he was not kicked.

              • RB2C replied to this.

                Wake me up when the novels finished. I might support and pay to read in patreon just for his works.

                OmnipotentDad Hmm I’m not sure what do you mean by us saying that Webnovel wants to remove Bai? I do clearly understand that he left on his own accord. This #ReturnBai hashtag is a response to the Author’s Thoughts section in his/her most recent chapter.

                  Forgot to mention, do continue to support this!!🙆🏻‍♀️😂

                    RB2C well... I can't understand the "Author's thoughts secion" but....

                    if you want Bai to return, the hashtag should be.

                    #BaiReturn = encourage by from returning.

                    If its.
                    #ReturnBai = it looks like someone kidnapped him/her, and removed him/her from webnovel.

                    Which would most likely become a trouble for webnovel if other people don't get it...
                    I mean... if you want Bai to return, ask for webnovel to host another competition where there's a lot of price money.

                    He will definitely come back, that's a 100% guarantee, I`m not sure if he'll stay, but as soon as there's money involve, he'll definitely be back.

                    So you should go and call for webnovel to host another "Please host another one with a lot of Price so Bai can Return to WN" competition.

                    Well that's the gist of it.

                    No money, no return.

                      Ehhh, let's be honest here guys. I enjoy reading Bai's novel and I really like his writing. However, this author honestly needs to work on his attitude and professionalism. To quote a few example, he wrote a book titled "The Book of the Universe" for a writing contest on Qidian and won the 1st and 2nd prize pool if I am not mistaken. Immediately after the writing contest ended, he informed his readers that he had stuff to do IRL and would need to take a break from writing for 2 weeks under the alias "Syusuke" or something. Of course, the reader believed in him and waited for the novel to get updated once again. However, 2 weeks down the road, the novel was still not updated and the author goes POOF into thin air. If this wasn't bad enough, Baisiwa started to get flamed on his main novel Legend of the Perfect Emperor at that point in time and started a rant/flame about his readers and phrased in a way that the only readers that deserve to read his works are payers and his novel is catered for them and no one else and normal readers have no rights to criticize his writing nor his work ethics because WE ARE NOT PAYING. Yeaps, fast forward a week after that, Baisiwa started to get done with his non paying readers and decide to throw a temper and delete all his novels on Qidian and said that he will only be writing on Patreon for paying users from then on. The author also decided to start an argument with other fellow authors for god knows what reason and threw shade at all the loyal readers on Qidian who has been reading his novel from the start. I as a loyal follower of his novel was utterly disappointed at that time and that still carries on till now. Baisiwa then decided to up his game and decided to delete the other novels written under his other alias and this is an abstract from his novel written under his alias Syusuke

                      "You thought this update was a chapter?

                      It was me, Bai, all along!

                      And I'm here to tell you that this novel has been dropped.

                      Might as well leave with a bang, right?

                      Which alias to reveal next?

                      Find out on the next episode of Shocking Revelation!"

                      AHHH, writing a novel under another alias, lying about having stuff to do IRL directly after the writing contest ended and claiming his prize, poofing directly after the writing contest for months without any further updates and finally deleting all content in that novel and showing his attitude to his readers who have been waiting for updates and loyally following him from the start. This clearly shows a lack of professionalism and respect for his readers. Therefore, I won't be begging for his return. If he wants to return so be it, if not so be it too. Baisiwa is honestly too greedy for money as shown from the facts above.

                      1. Insinuating that non paying readers have no rights to request him to follow his promised schedule nor have any rights to read his superb creation because THEY ARE NOT PAYING.

                      2. Writing a novel under another alias which ranked second or first in some weeks for the prize money during the writing competition and VANISHING into thin air directly after the writing competition ended and the prize has been claimed.

                      This shows an utter lack in professionalism and respect for his fellow readers. Which author doesn't have a few haters here and there? I honestly do not understand why the need to insult his readers and delete his novels just because of a few haters here and there. Another reason why he is returning to Qidian is probably because his Patreon payers are getting lesser and lesser. It used to be 90~100 a few weeks to a month back directly after the fiasco of deleting his novels and it has steadily dropped to 80+ now. So, what is the main reason for him wanting to returning to Qidian? I would assume increasing his popularity because if he doesn't have a platform to gain popularity, there won't be more Patreon payers reading his novels and his current patreon count will steadily decline till a negligible amount. Therefore, he has decided to return to Qidian and requesting for users to use the tag #returnbai to beg for his return because it would truly be shameful for him to strot in openly and start writing again after everything that happened and users have understood his true character.

                      Ahhh, just to say, I am not a hater of his novel but on the contrary, I really like his novels and read it on a daily basis but if this is the attitude that he is gonna bring forward back into Qidian having a lack of professionalism, inability to control his temper, having no respect for his readers, being unable to keep his promise of completing his novels then I honestly prefer him not to come back to Qidian because the higher the expectation, the higher the disappointment. For those avid fans and supporters of his, take his post with a pinch of salt and not go ballistic over this post. I just felt a need to get my thoughts out there and meant no ill intent to anyone else. Thank you. =)

                        i used to give him money on patreon... but he doesn't understand what his novel's value is. I tried to explain to him that you cant charge 10$ for 6 chapters a month... that's just not how the world works. Qidian is already ridiculously expensive at 40$ for a half novel.

                        he would get a ton more ppl on patreon and subsequently a lot more money if he just charged a dollar per month for all the chapters he writes. Until he does this, i wont support his patreon.

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