For me, when I read other people's novels, There are some points or flaws that make me don't want to continue reading, for example:
- Lore or info dump: some novel open the story by explain a huge lore, system or world building in first chapter. for me this is too much and make me don't want to read anymore.
- Too many flowery word or too much descriptive writing: If it too much, if feel like the story does not proceed at all such as the author try to write a scene where MC try to escape from something but the whole chapter is only about that and the whole detail and explaination is only with the scenary, cloth or expression.
- Typo, grammar, and paragraph format: I know all of you also hate this