For me, when I read other people's novels, There are some points or flaws that make me don't want to continue reading, for example:

  1. Lore or info dump: some novel open the story by explain a huge lore, system or world building in first chapter. for me this is too much and make me don't want to read anymore.
  2. Too many flowery word or too much descriptive writing: If it too much, if feel like the story does not proceed at all such as the author try to write a scene where MC try to escape from something but the whole chapter is only about that and the whole detail and explaination is only with the scenary, cloth or expression.
  3. Typo, grammar, and paragraph format: I know all of you also hate this 😆

    NewbieJimjim i agree with you with my novel i try to move the story as much as possible to the point lore has not actually been shown yet in my story but it has been hinted a few times in certain chapters. i think when doing lore use the IV drip method : meaning show lore in small drips and spread it out across your story.

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