motherandsonnie Iβll read all 8 of your current chapters and give you 2 powerstones with an honest review and some comments if you read all of my current chapters (28). If you give an honest review, I already know about the grammar issues and have been cleaning it up since starting from the first few chapters. But any other critiques are valid, though I recommend reading my synopsis first.
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