Quwalasto I will not do it through comments or the review perse because I feel that can hinder the story. Did you want me to drop the constructive feedback here?

      wilde0985 If you have questions regarding the story you can comment on the paragraph! As for the criticism, you can mention how I can improve in the review

        wilde0985 Hi! I saw your comments on my novel and I adore them. Whilst you go through mine I'll start going through yours. Which novel of yours would you like me to read through?

            Who is ready to check out mine ?
            If you are then search
            She turns glamorous after marriage by okwuma
            Once you done yours and I receive a notification them imma do yours too
            Or you can simply tag me

              Quwalasto Oh thank you I really like the story so far. I just have a few things to say about it when I finish the reading, I will do the review, but also I would like to tell you through here because it's quite long and short what I want to ask, so I hope you don't have a problem with that. My story is called Sky Falls: A Loop in Time (BL) it's omegaverse. It doesn't have smut or anything.

              https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26239265106741005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321630622

              Anyways I have a discord too, you can find me here: https://discord.gg/gnkcN4wa because I don't know how to share my profile.

                  Chiyo_Kobayashi Sure, mmm, you have more chapters than me I'm still reading Quwalasto story, so I will start with yours tomorrow if that's ok with you. Oh, and my story is BL Omegaverse I hope you don't have a problem with that if you don't read BL let me know.

                  Edit: It doesn't have smut.

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