Hello Everyone,
This is my first time writing a novel, so I hope you guys would give it a chance. I'm entering the 'Writing Prompts Contest #4 - Entertainment Industry'. I really appreciate any feedback, I'm know that I'm new, but I'm willing to improve. I hope you guys enjoy it and thanks a lot in advance. :)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11403664306352105

Synopsis
Wang Tian He is the 3rd princess born in the great Wang’s Ancient Empire. She became skilled in the four arts: calligraphy, chess, painting, and Qin, just only at the small age of 7. Since she had the time and was bored with her life, she went to learn other arts. Then, 3 years later, she completely mastered dancing, acting, singing, and flute playing. Her family members were astounded that they birthed a genius, so they supported her in learning other arts. She was bored with arts for women, so she went ahead and started learning arts for men. Then, 5 years later, she became skilled in close combat martial arts, archery, horse backing riding, and sword fighting. However, on the day she mastered those skills and wanted to learn more, something happened.

System: “Host, you’re perfect to test this new ‘All Stars System!”

Tian He standing in a white space: “.....No”

    Hey guys,

    thanks for the comments and reviews so far. The positivity about my novel is an extreme help for me while writing. I never thought I would be so happy about a strangers encouragement and good criticism. ​I hope you will keep enjoying my story.

    For all the new guys in the forum you can find my novel in the link below :

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/11362483406339605/The-Monkey-God

    I started it for the competition #5: Evolved Beasts in Another World.

    As always any comments for improvements are welcome.

      Please everyone read and check out my story for contest #5
      Name: Evolution of the Rabbit God
      It's about a palate (health) safety inspector who becomes a rabbit. There are 1660 others who reincarnate as humans who will have different powers and their memories of course. Most of those humans were criminals from a prison. He has a RuneScape system (i don't mention that name so directly in the story btw)

      I got 6 chapters and just a few words short of 10k words (only like 10% of those words are repeated words or quest stuff i think)

        No news about 6&7 week contest?
        I'm start questioning web novel seriousness in making this contest 😑😑

          SweetsTomato Oh Lol! Finally realized it. No-Contest Thread at this hour. I think this is too 'fast'. 1 Week for Contest and 1 Week for 'scoring'/checking is better in my opinion.

          Have you got the result of 3rd contest? Your novel is the front page, together with other 'game' related novel. I believed this show the result had been delivered.

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              3 months later

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                a year later

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