Hey guys!
Im a new author writing my first novel and would appreciate any tips and advice people may have so I could improve it as much as I can. Feel free to provide criticism and feedback so my writing can get better.
Leave a link for your novel if you'd like me to review it as well!
Thanks!
Shamelessness is a necessity for any author it seems, so let me display it to the fullest.
Try my original novel about an innocent young boy deemed a failure all his life and must discover the harsh realities of his world.
The Mage of the Millennium.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105/The-Mage-of-the-Millennium
I appreciate any suggestions and comments you have (Bad or Good)!
Sagesheep would you like to review swap? I'm going for a dark theme as well although it hasn't fully started in that direction yet. I feel like I could learn some things from your writing as well!
Sweating_Cloud would you like to review swap?
This is an amazing idea. Don't mind me being shameless as well. It's my first time writing and would appreciate as many honest reviews as possible. No need to be perfect 5 stars, if you feel it's a 1 star novel don't mind to give it that. I just really want tips on how to improve my writing so if you feel its bad please let me know why!
The Mage of the Millennium
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105/The-Mage-of-the-Millennium
It's a fantasy novel that will be very dark. If you like dark concepts or are edgy give it a read lol. I promise I'll make it as dark as I can because the mc will be going through some traumatic stuff.
Thanks all!
Ierrech I see you around the forums a lot so I assume you know quite a bit about these novels. Would you mind quickly checking mine out and leaving a honest review on what I need to improve on? It doesn't have to be a 5 star review, just an honest one that shows how you feel about the story. Thanks!
Morvian Try changing the name a little bit. The wording doesn't sound great. Try "My Wife is a Gangster Boss"
Shameless author from the last contest. Please check out my first novel
The Mage of the Millennium about a young noble mage who after being discovered as necromancer is set to die by his own father. He must find a way to survive, the hard way.
Hey guys we've updated to chapter 6 so far. Quite a lot has happened so if you haven't yet I strongly suggest you check out my first novel:
The Mage of the Millennium
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105
We also have a discord where I will chat with readers and accept suggestions and advice for the novel. I will work with readers there and add things they want and make my story more interactive!
At first this novel was just for fun, but now I want to do it not just for fun, but as something I really like to do now. Please give my novel a read. If you like it dump those power stones and reviews. If you don't like it please comment and review as to what the problems are so I can work to fix them!
The third chapter of my first webnovel The Mage of the Millennium is out!
Please check it out as I really appreciate any views and comments on my work.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105/32333203515694012/The-Mage-of-the-Millennium/Gift
We're getting some character development through to bridge to juicy action coming soon. I promised a dark tale and a dark tale you'll get. It'll be arriving soon in the next few chapters!
SnoozySloth Hey I noticed your amazing review of the other webnovels in the contest and was wondering if you could review mine as well. I'm a rookie writer with this being my first time writing a novel of this sort and would appreciate any tips and advice I can get!
Thanks for the review mate! I appreciate the advice a lot. Your writing overall is quite good, but I'd suggest to change the cover a little bit. It seems a little unprofessional. Other than that great job!
I made my first webnovel because I really love the idea of The Legendary Mage. I've always been into fantasy novels and even wanted to write one. This is the perfect opportunity I needed. If you guys could check it out, I'd really appreciate it a lot! I only wrote one chapter so far, but I'll continue working hard on it. Thank you!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105
The Mage of the Millennium
Synopsis:
Pithar his whole life has been a failure. His father is the Archmage ruling over the magic kingdom and his siblings all geniuses. The disgrace to the family is condemned to be a forbidden necromancer in the Magi Trial and ordered to be executed by his own father. Set free by his doting older sister he must weave his way around a world unfamiliar to him. He must discover the hidden facets of magic and learn to use the strongest yet most vulnerable part of him, his emotions. Follow Pithar's journey as he explores a world unfamiliar to him and discovers the art of treachery, betrayal, and agony. All he has left is hope.