FeatherlyDuck

  • Jun 1, 2019
  • Joined Mar 28, 2019
  • Hello! I've started a new novel and would appreciate feedback for it or just anyone willing to read it! It's going to be a fairly dark story, though not one that would qualify it for 18+.

    I hope you will give it a chance! https://www.webnovel.com/book/13871961706918305

    EUNOIA--

    Beautiful.
    The essence of the word eludes many.
    The sadness of the word illudes more.

    Life in this world was made to be "beautiful," but the reality is fleeting as if it were an untouchable illusion.

    But, there are a few, who were born into this world, who are able to find the beauty that was lying dormant under the deceptive, dark, and decrepit minds that live there.

    • Hello! For anyone interested, I'm writing a dark novel that takes place in a fantasy world. It won't be dark to the point where it's 18+, oh no, but it will hold these elements.

      Anyways, for anyone remotely interested, I've posted the first chapter of it and hope you all give it a try!
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/13871961706918305

      EUNOIA--

      Beautiful.
      The essence of the word eludes many.
      The sadness of the word illudes more.

      Life in this world was made to be "beautiful," but the reality is fleeting as if it were an untouchable illusion.

      But, there are a few, who were born into this world, who are able to find the beauty that was lying dormant under the deceptive, dark, and decrepit minds that live there.

      • Chryiss Hi! Thanks for writing a review on my story, I appreciate it! I'm taking the things you pointed out and am currently trying to implement them. Also, I've read your story as well and have left a review!

        @TwistedWhimsy I'm going to write a review for your story soon and I hope you can offer some pointers to me too!

        Many thanks to both of you and best wishes =)

        • Chryiss I'm new to writing on webnovel and was wondering what auxiliary chapters were. Do you mind explaining it to me, please?

          Also, I've found prompt #62 to be intriguing, so I decided to choose that as my first story.
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/13397048705670505
          A review over it would be much appreciated, as I'm trying to improve myself as a writer. If it is ok, I would enjoy reading your review over it and I can try the same with your story. Thank you :)

          • Hello again! I am here because my thick skin willed it. :)
            I have just updated my entry with chapter two, and if there is anything I could work on to better it, please notify me. Thank you!

            Also, I didn't clarify in my last post, but this is for #62.

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/13397048705670505

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