I_refuse

- May 10, 2021
- Joined Aug 31, 2019
- In New writer
justmekyrrha not to my knowledge
Vrinda_Khanna I preference the Second one, it motivates me
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-colours on a spectrum like from lighter to darker.
-a star constellation that grows and gets stronger with each star. The characters individuality and their path also gets more flashed out with each star.
-Maybe a curse, that the magic slowly transforms the body while it is active.
baybe it starts with the hand and creeps up the arm, so a strong character would even have parts of their face changed while someone weak only has a dot on their hand.
The „curse“ or however you call it could even tie into your system.
Maby depending on what magic you use it begins somewhere different like your stomach and looks different or it is some kind of armement that only appears while casting.
-many you also have something floating behind you, a rune formation or an orb many even a creature that grows more complex/stronger the more you advance.Raven_2112
1 don’t do unessesary sidequests or filler as you might also call it. It is just a sloughs to read through.
You can take mor time talking about the world an little details, or build caracters through character interactions. Or focus a bit on one of your side charactersI would like a Generation Story.
What I mean by that is that the story doesn’t have just one mc, but rather that the mc changes through the story, and we observe the families history. The protagonists would have to live with the consequences of the previous mcs action weather good or bad.
It oils also be interesting, a once jung friend as companion becomes the next mcs old mentor.
I am still thinking about writing something like this one day but not now.RJMidnight how many times did you already say that?
I can feel your suffering.I plan out the main story, what is the purpose of the character and what are these motives, when will I introduce which character, and the general progression. The farther into the story the thinner my outline is.
Than I write. And while writing I plan ahead the next couple of plotlines, meaning that my plans get clearer the nearer they are to my story progress. I am flexible however, for example I used a rather minor character originall to play a medium important role. Characters I plan almost nothing, I give them a setting and let them develop while I write them.
The one thing I did however plan fully was the worldbuilding.Anotoki
-writing advise is never absolute, don’t follow something through 100% just think about it and if it can help you.
-use other sensory organs than sight, smell touch and hearing are greate to immerse the reader.
-make characters, friendships feel lively by making small character interactions, a friend patting the main character on the bag when he is down, small exchanges to flash out the character usw.
-don’t use too many character especially when you are new. Too many important people will make the reader confused, and you won’t be able to give enought screentime for everybody so that the reader does not care about them.well just sounds like almost half of all wuxia out there
Tales of Demons and Gods
https://www.webnovel.com/book/humanitys-third-revolution_17676645205257505
Hers mine, It is about an MC that tries to lead a revolution
Lord of The mysteris, Just fantastic
You can try mine. It is not long jet but I can at least promise an interesting setting(If it is your taste)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/humanitys-third-revolution_17676645205257505New writer here I just want to get your opinions,
To what point will you ignore spelling mistakes or incorrect gramma and still read the book if you find your story engaging?I personaly have a relative low tolarance(despite me not being the smoothest writer either) and it annoyes me when the gramma is really bad. Spelling mistakes are more easy to forgive thought.
Quartermaster
https://www.webnovel.com/book/humanitys-third-revolution_17676645205257505
Here is mine it is quite shortI can not say that I am experienced but here is my honest opinion:
-Just write, although I have just written about 20 000 words I can clearly see the difference between my early writings and my later ones.
-Try to put yourself into the perspective of the reader, sometimes what you think is perfectly clear makes no sense for another because you brain atomaticly fills in the blanks. It is like a song, if you know the lyrics you can understand it perfectly fine, but if you dont it sounds like some slang
-Caracter interactions make the story interesting (mostly there are naturally other factors) but a story without caracter interactions has a good chance to be boring
-conflict drives the story- Edited
Humanitys Third Revolution
https://www.webnovel.com/book/humanitys-third-revolution_17676645205257505
genre: Fantasy/SI-FI
tags: Action,Military,Adventure,weak to strong (romance will come later)
15 chapterThe knowlage of an ailien civiliciation at his disposal Kieron sets out to carve out a future for humanity and one day reach the stars.
But in the chaotic and dark world he was unfortionatly born upon he has no choice but to fight in a bloody revolution to accomblish his goal.I planned out the whole story and created my own world races and coultures.
I know it is not much and the writing can be a bir rought around the eges but I am confident that it will someday work out. I am a new writer and it would be nice to have at least some reviews and feedback. It wount take too long to go through so the time investment is relativly minimal.