IvoryDragon

  • Dec 2, 2019
  • Joined Sep 2, 2018
  • So reviews are great and all right? But what do most of us authors want on our chapters? COMMENTS! There are so many people tired of seeing their favorite web novels, and even web novels they don't even like, rack up on comments chapter after chapter. (It's me, I'm so many people) Yet your own novel gets one comment every third full moon.

    Well, I have a suggestion!

    Post links to your novel here, and I will comment on every single chapter that I read! We're talking genuine feedback on the chapter itself. Only thing I ask in return? Read at least two chapters of my own novel and leave comments on each chapter you do read?

    So what do you think? Any takers? If so, respond to this thread with your own book link and we can make this a party.

    My Novel

    • I've been told this book is a hidden gem, but I don't know how to promote without being shameless so...

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      Sky Fall Novel

      • SO my first book Sky Fall Legend Book - Legend is in online stores today. However, the second installment of this series is still in writing. Help me out by reading along and dropping some comments, chapter ratings, and reviews.

        It's a great story. Enjoy.

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        This is the quest of a Trill young Jodye.

        Eyes bloodshot since the past still hurt him.

        New life formed, and it's only something like hell,

        Tragic little Jodye, it just wasn't in his sight well,

        On the night the sky fell were rivers of blood.

        The chosen one is frozen by the death of his loves.

        Death is just a journey when reflection occurs,

        Everything could vanish in the moment evil is spurred,

        And for justice to occur, you can't return as you were.

        Change is fundamental, pain is made to endure.

        Time is of the essence, our origin is a blessing,

        Once the truth is unearthed only heaven can protect him,

        He's a legend.


        :Warning: This novel contains graphic scenes and content that some may consider traumatizing. Please be advised, and read at your own discretion.

        A retired meta-human spy has his whole life flipped upside down when a stranger disintegrates him with a magic gun! But before he can blink, he is reborn in a world full of magic, heroes, mighty pharaoh gods, and ancient titans.

        In the lowest realm of the Divine Universe, a young adult named Jodye Trill from modern Earth is reborn in a world full of magic he never imagined!

        In his first life, he was born into poverty in an affluent society!

        In this life, he was born into luxury in a cruel and vicious land!

        It's an unknown yet beautiful land of spiritual cultivation and martial arts but plagued by dark plots and evil techniques. Women are victimized, and used as tools!

        Once the destructive nature of the land extends to his own family, Jodye is unable to stand for the state of this world any longer."Strength! Without strength I watched my lover suffer. Without strength, I stood helpless as that same lover died!! Without strength, there is no respect, no love, and there can be no peace! I must be stronger. I will carve out my legend of strength to bring my world peace!!"

        Sky Fall Novel

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          This is the quest of a Trill young Jodye.

          Eyes bloodshot since the past still hurt him.

          New life formed, and it's only something like hell,

          Tragic little Jodye, it just wasn't in his sight well,

          On the night the sky fell were rivers of blood.

          The chosen one is frozen by the death of his loves.

          Death is just a journey when reflection occurs,

          Everything could vanish in the moment evil is spurred,

          And for justice to occur, you can't return as you were.

          Change is fundamental, pain is made to endure.

          Time is of the essence, our origin is a blessing,

          Once the truth is unearthed only heaven can protect him,

          He's a legend.


          :Warning: This novel contains graphic scenes and content that some may consider traumatizing. Please be advised, and read at your own discretion.

          A retired meta-human spy has his whole life flipped upside down when a stranger disintegrates him with a magic gun! But before he can blink, he is reborn in a world full of magic, heroes, mighty pharaoh gods, and ancient titans.

          In the lowest realm of the Divine Universe, a young adult named Jodye Trill from modern Earth is reborn in a world full of magic he never imagined!

          In his first life, he was born into poverty in an affluent society!

          In this life, he was born into luxury in a cruel and vicious land!

          It's an unknown yet beautiful land of spiritual cultivation and martial arts but plagued by dark plots and evil techniques. Women are victimized, and used as tools!

          Once the destructive nature of the land extends to his own family, Jodye is unable to stand for the state of this world any longer."Strength! Without strength I watched my lover suffer. Without strength, I stood helpless as that same lover died!! Without strength, there is no respect, no love, and there can be no peace! I must be stronger. I will carve out my legend of strength to bring my world peace!!"

          Sky Fall Novel

          • Shiane1465 Hi, I'm also writing a novel. what's the name of yours?

            Edit: nevermind. ill check you out!

            • New cover art!

              Mystic Pharaoh God!

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              I'm getting better, yeah?
              I need reviews please!
              Mystic Pharaoh God
              On the book, not just the cover. However, feel free to tell me how you feel about either! If the cover you see is still gold it's not the new one.

              See you on the other side.

            • Hey there. Looking for some review for my book.
              Not just from you, but for any review I see on my book's review wall I will be sure to return the favor in no less than a week's time.
              Check me out please...

              Author: Ivory Dragon
              Title: Mystic Pharaoh
              Genre: Science Fiction, Romance, Modern Fantasy, Supernatural
              Link: Mystic Pharaoh on Webnovel
              Synopsis: What is a Mystic Pharaoh?

              A shining light within the deepest abyss.

              A beacon of strength in the face of calamity.

              A warrior unrestrained by the physical plane, standing united with the natural elements.

              All races worship the Pharaoh as a god among ants.

              Until the day the smallest and weakest of the ants rose up in resistance!

              In the Magi Era humanity has discovered the wonders of magic! This brought humans, the race once thought to be the weakest existence, to the peak of competition with the universe's strongest races!

              Unfortunately, not everyone can be in that competition.

              Casino Riot spent his whole life being looked down on! Even still he never looked down on himself. He knew he was destined to eclipse the glory of all others!

              It was what he was born to do.

              In an age where humanity has discovered the secrets of the universe, or the ability to utilize origin energy, becoming a magi is the only way to earn respect! However, Casino seems to have zero talent in cultivating!

              Of course, that was all before the day he punched a hole in someone's face!

              Join Casino as he discovers the power that sleeps within and discovers the ever-changing world of the mystics!

              -- Thank you!

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              • Redanxelar

                The book is called Sky Fall Legend, second volume is out two days ago. Continues today in a couple of hours. I made the new book cover myself!

                Sky Fall Link

                • I can offer you absolutely no compensation, only a great book to peruse, and the experience you'll gain through your efforts. If anyone is willing to help, I'd be a great partner!

                • MichelAyres My novel can probably be considered close to such a thing? There's more then one MC, but they all share a body. Also, it'll be awhile before the book gets to the point when they can operate independently from each other but this will come. Seriously check it out, might be close to what your interested it.

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