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MasterRabbink right? authors are human too. All that writing requires a lot from an author.
If they don't like it then they should just go find the ones they like. There's no need for hate comments and hate reviews. This is what I do...

MasterRabbink I'm not sure. I wish he would, like in the drama Love 020. It would be boring otherwise. But the TKA production team is very secretive, no leaked info about anything. Even Su Mucheng's actress is still kept a secret .
And the first episode will air on 31 Dec 2018. So far away...

Transparency I think it would look better without the black box. Try getting rid of it. I think the background image will pop out beautifully like that.

MasterRabbink
BTTH - 45 episodes
Martial universe - 60 episodes
TKA - 80 episodes

Guess TKA got a lot of extra budget because they don't have to spend on expensive period costumes

MasterRabbink eh, you missed the one that is airing now, "Martial Universe". This one is pretty cool, at least for the few episodes that I've watched. It's already on TV in Malaysia.

Apparently the font used on the cover must also be purchased, or free for commercial use or you could be sued by the license owners...

silentscarlettt this is a very badass, eye-catching cover! I believe it's thumbnail would look very cool and attractive even when sitting together with other covers.

lool90 same! Need my daily TKA fix!

If you think WN is bad, you should try Tapas.

Rin_Bean_Artist try The Last X. Awesome story and well-written.

MasterRabbink existing even if the tag does not appear on your novel page yet, the novel will appear in search result if the same tag is clicked by someone somewhere. That's why it's important to tag your novel with popular tags.

Alliosis I think there's a button in inkstone that let's you join the author discord channel directly. Try explore the inkstone first.

RottenHermit here's a few
The Last X
Oh. My. Fate
Frozen Tears
A Gatekeeper & The Celestial Sovereign

• If you do a search in the search box, just type 'bl' a few novels will appear
• you could also use the tags. If you find the 'bl' or 'yaoi' tags, just click them and you'll find more

Khanx I'd prefer a like and dislike button. For when you don't feel ready for a review but you want to show your support.

Transparency I'm honored. But I hope you know they're just suggestions. This is your story so you should be free to do as you please.

I have just figured out what's missing in your story. It's the game itself. I don't play games so I know next to nothing about harem games. In the novel, there is not much info as you just skimmed over everything and keep the focus on the MC and his little group. Maybe you could give more explanation of the game and what MC feels about it? You mention he hates it because he is gay, but that was too general. The more specific you go, the more the MC's personality is developed.

Also, if you are keeping the focus on MC and not the game, the MC's personality needs to be more outstanding. For now, he's just a generic character. Give him a quirk that could intrigue readers quickly. For example, when people mention Naruto, everyone knows he is a hated Kyuubi monster and has Sasuke-complex. Meanwhile Sasuke is an emo guy with a brother complex. My MC Kazuki is a stupid old fart who knows nothing about being a girl. Or a decent human being.

If you are focusing on the game world, then you need to develop the game more. Like how it is played, what to do to score, and what not to do avoid problems... since MC is gay you want to go the BL harem route? that would be something rarely seen. No matter what, I am always in for a good BL story XD.

Strazz instead of authors, I think the real money-grubbers are the publishing companies. It's a capitalist country after all. Even if some of the authors make millions a year, they are the exception, not the majorities.
Look at the factories and companies in China, cranking out cheap products because of cheap labors, not caring about quality and services. Did you see the pattern?

Transparency Thank you! Your review is quite detailed so I saved it in a doc XD. Makes it easy to edit as I refer to them later. I always knew my first chapter is not quite right but I don't know how to fix it. Your detailed pointers are greatly needed.
Also I think I should reciprocate. Please bear with my slowness though.

With a feeling like I was exploding, my 25 years of existence wasted by the screeching of brakes and a drunk driver.
-> Feeling like I was exploding into a million pieces, my 25 years of existence was laid to waste in mere seconds by the screeching of brakes originating from a drunk driver's car.

I just feel like the description of the accident could be more detailed. Although I think you kept it vague to make it lighthearted, maybe you could go more in-depth. Because his pitifulness is the hook (I think) so it needs to be a little more heart-wrenching
A lot more editing is needed too.
I don't know what else to say. I'm not really good at reviewing, but I think the story is a bit bland for the first 3 chapters. It's lacking something. I don't play games so I maybe its just me though.
I love mc's inner monologues, he's quite sassy.

I'm sorry, my mind is quite in disarray right now. I'll do a better review later?

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11180277206281105

Please take a look and give me some feedback too. FYI your story is a lot like mine; written from first-person perspective and the characters are Japanese. Though I am trying for absurdity and outrageous humor.
Please tell me I do it correctly because there is this one reader who thought I missed the mark. But then there is no 'comedy' genre so I opted for 'realistic fiction', so maybe he is expecting something realistic.

I'm waiting for Cktalon to lock this thread