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MatheusHehehaw
- Aug 25, 2023
- Joined Mar 27, 2023
Hi, please can you give me a 19-year-old caucasian brazilian male, with short black hair, brown eyes, average physique, he has some bloody bandages around his body because he is hurt, resting at a bonfire with his grey wolf companion, they are outdoors below a tree.
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Hi, I'm interested in a review swap on the first chapter, but if you want me to review more chapters it's fine as long as it's the prologue or some sort of introduction.
It's just the prologue of around 2k words, would you kindly let me know if I managed to get the points I tried to make?
The tone: the main character starts as an average Joe, in his quest to be a good person and go to heaven when he dies, maybe things can go bad and dark if he gets unlucky, just like in dark stories like Berserk, Goblin Slayer, Pathologic and similars.Genre: dark fantasy, adventure, maybe comedy I don't know XDD, has magic stuff, and has a system similar to Dungeons & Dragons.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/catholic-berserk_26537960106665205