I'm not trying to be grammar police but you spell confidence wrong remove letter m with n
UncleDodger

- Nov 22, 2022
- Joined Apr 17, 2021
Dao_Li sometimes Google is your friend it best search up by yourself
I'm not calling out name of some author but there one message I would like to say please stop copying someone's work before it too late you will become hollow person without effort
Can you fill in plot hole stories how cultivator went to wrong realm? Known as western world
You know writer are like farmer you plant ideas seed in the pot and let it grow with water but what if you plant too many ideas seed in one pot it will grow a mess and withering away.
In short: go back to square one and choose one story ideas improve it too much cause downgraded.
No thank you
Shadowfang main character being forced feeding by system defying reality
Think outside of the box and branch out different idea
[unknown] does main character fall in the hole of Mary Sue?
Hero villain demon lord consider overuse plot in alot stories don't go that way be different.
Tip: hey just wanted that point that out you are using a japanese name that some reader they don't like and accused you being weeb devoted yourself to Japan culture.
Here things we want in harem:
•get creative and branch out new ideas
•not all girls insanely attracted to mc he is stranger
•group personality and how they get along
•personality and why she slowly like mc
•less then 2-3 girl to take time us reader to know them