albakata

  • Feb 6, 2021
  • Joined Jan 31, 2021
  • Hey guys! So I’m at a stomp here as my brain can’t come up with more creativity for my novel. There are a lot of transmigration and fantasy stories here that it’s getting repetitive. I want to stand out more and make sure my readers are getting something fresh.

    Any suggestion is appreciated!

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

    For more background:
    My novel is entitled “Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse” and it’s about twins who got sent out to a different universe because of a familial duty. Throughout their kin, everyone was required to successfully meet with Destiny and hold a bargain with it. For centuries, only the twins were able to do it.

    In the new universe, they’re forced to blend in while doing their best to survive. There’s no typical system here or cheat codes. They have to work their way to the top on their own—a more realistic way of training and working hard.

    Near the end of the novel, I will be placing a twist on the story. But before then, I’m thinking what I could do to improve it?

    Thank you so much for reading until here! I hope you can impart some of your knowledge with me T___T

    • Infinity619 I think you shouldn’t use OCD since it trivializes the struggles of people who have that mental illness. Care and attention must be given when handling those terms. Instead, you can use the term “fastidious.” It’s kind of the same thing with what you’re trying to say but doesn’t refer to a mental illness so it’s better.

      • Carciphones_02 Here's my novel if you're interested! I also have a Discord (https://discord.gg/e2FvZA4jwc) where we can discuss my work or promote your stories as well. The genre of my story perfectly fits the novel you are looking for.

        Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
        Author: albakata
        Genre: Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure, Isekai (Transmigration), Shonen
        Synopsis:

        After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

        In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

        But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

        With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

        • Mai0414 Here's my novel if you're interested! I also have a Discord (https://discord.gg/e2FvZA4jwc) where we can discuss my work or promote your stories as well. My story perfectly fits the novel you are looking for. The MC starts from level 1 with no system.

          Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
          Author: albakata
          Genre: Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure, Isekai (Transmigration), Shonen
          Synopsis:

          After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

          In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

          But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

          With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

          • Here's my novel if you're interested! I also have a Discord where we can discuss my work or promote your stories as well.

            Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
            Author: albakata
            Genre: Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure, Isekai (Transmigration), Shonen
            Synopsis:

            After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

            In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

            But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

            With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

            • Hey guys! I just created a discord server for my novel and where you can also promote or talk about your work. I'm guessing if anyone is interested to join? If you are, please comment!

            • Maryixxx Thank you! If I do that, how long will it take before more people start to read my work?

            • BrianG9677 Thank you! I'm trying to update daily and stock some chapters as well in the process

              • Hi guys! I'm wondering how could I make my novel more known? Any tip is appreciated. Thanks!

                • Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
                  Author: albakata
                  Genre: Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure, Isekai, Shonen
                  Synopsis:

                  After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

                  In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

                  But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

                  With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

                  Link: http://wbnv.in/a/22Tfcu6

                  • GoldenKitsune Here's mine!

                    Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
                    Genre: Fantasy, Action, Romance, Adventure
                    Synopsis:
                    After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

                    In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

                    But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

                    With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

                    • Title: Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse
                      Genre: Fantasy, Action, Romance, Adventure
                      Synopsis:
                      After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.

                      In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.

                      But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.

                      With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.

                      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

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