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Chryiss
Well, your story was a new taste for me. I have read until chapter two(four chapters), and I can say... I don't know :) It's just that a part of me wants to read it.
I'll leave a review for you tomorrow. It'll be a constructive one like you wanted, and I'll leave another one when I catch up to the latest chapter.
Also, you should take a look at mine. If it's not your cup of tea, then you wouldn't enjoy editing it. I don't want to force you into anything in any way. (YOU ARE AT THE LOSING SIDE OF THIS BARGAIN :P EDITING IS HARDER THAN YOU THINK! COUGH!-cough!-My hand slipped)
Tomorrow, I hope to talk with you again...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12401782806389305/The-Sole-Skull
Me gonna sleep...