Okay, I'm going straight to the point here. I've been thinking about the quality of my novel and I need some feedback on how well the story progresses, characters, plot etc. I already asked for feedback on my novel from my fellow readers in my novel's synopsis and whatnot. Constructive criticisms are encouraged. I hope anyone can say something about my novel as it keeps bugging me about how I can improve my novel further but I don't know if there's anything wrong with it or what.

My novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11343603505344605/Epiphany-of-The-Weak

I appreciate all the help and thank you guys in advance! :D you guys r the best.

    HavenlyJeep the problem is most reader already used to some op MC, or cliche when the MC born into weak person find treasure, meet powerful ancestor etc.
    Now, it's only depend on you how to make reader stay with your novel

        SweetsTomato Oh, I see. Thank you for your reply :). My basic idea for the novel is to have a dark, mature story of a little girl with op ability that causes people to see her as a monster.

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