Bin auch ein deutscher, haha, mein Englisch ist ganz ok und fehlerfrei aber auch nicht perfekt. Solltest aber schon auf einige Grundregeln achten, kann viele abschrecken wenn du die Verben nicht richtig konjugierst oder Groß-Kleinschreibung nicht ganz einhälst. Wobei allerdings es anderen komplett egal ist und trotzdem das Geschrieben mögen ;)
Das Thema des Buches sollte dich interessieren, und du solltest dir darüber Gedanken machen was du damit erreichen willst, wo deine Charaktere enden und wie sie sich entwickeln sollen. Ist besser wenn man ein grobes Bild vor Augen hat. Und es muss nicht ewig lang gehen solange du dein Ziel erreichst, aber am Besten nicht mitten in der Geschichte iwo droppen. Das mögen viele verständlicherweise nicht.
Ich schreibe an zwei Storys, und für mich persönlich ging es darum eigene Ideen aufzuschreiben die ich originell fand im Vergleich zu den Storys die hier veröffentlicht werden.
Ich wollte auch ein Mix kreieren, zwischen diesem typischen Chinesischen Genre und den mir bekannten Westlichen (Fantasy) Geschichten.

    If you want to gain confidence, Write a FanFic! A FanFic about Systems and Anime! You will get tons of followers and 5 Star review and positive comments!
    Maybe you could use that as a stepping Stone for your Future writing

      RyZiinG For me, I just remember that this is a hobby. I can't get put down by bad comments on something I am doing for fun.

          RyZiinG If you have a system put that on your title. That is VERY IMPORTANT. I would suggest Reborn with Football System or Reborn with a System to Play Football.

          One bad side. Most Webnovel reader are 'English Speaker'. US, India, Philippines. US loves American Football and NBA, India is the land of Cricket. Based on those, football is a bit niche here. However, it had a potential since you have little competition. Football is the number 1 sport in the World for a reason.

          Check the category! Your novel already on the top of the sport category and had bigger chance to be picked by sport fans.

              every child's not every children's and probably should be their dream (in the first sentence)

              not sure if god being lowercase will trigger anyone. like, I'm not religious, but some people would be like, "It's God you heathen!" Unless you mean some other god. I've read much worse and don't really see anything too terrible.

                RyZiinG well, for non u.s reader, using football is alright alright, but in u.s reader football = rugby
                Why not using soccer instead?

                    SweetsTomato Nope. This is football.

                    Only that cigarette company called it soccer. Do not believe a cigarette company about sport. They only know how to do bridge and badminton. That trigger this Rabbink.

                        Hi I'm a new author as well. I love writing but never got the chance to practice it. I've been always an avid reader to alot of novels. I've built up quite alot of ideas so this is my first one.

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/11396228006349605

                        The story is about a young gamer transfered to another world together with the games system and the monsters in the game.

                        The plot is building up slowly but the main genre is fantasy and games.

                        Thanks kindly appreciate your help.

                          lynerparel

                          Thanks yeah he was cool so I decided to base my mc on his looks hehe.
                          I'm going to read your story too and put it in my library 😃 I'll review it once I've read it.

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