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It sounds like an interesting world. Just note that World Building and Kingdom Building are two different concepts. World Building simply describes how an author constructs their setting. All novels have World Building.
Kingdom Building on the other hand means that the MC is literally developing some kind of state usually with a fixed geographic territory or setting; such as a city, country, nation, dungeon, colony, fleet of space ships etc.
I'm currently working on a take on typical VRMMOs set in America, not sure where it's going yet but it's going. First chapter will likely be up tonight, for those interested. (Tonight in Central Standard, GMT -6)
Eternal Kingdom
Chapter 2 and 3 is up!
Vgnette Nice pic
lynerparel Thank you, I mashed two pictures together and produced that.
Vgnette oh by the way read your story I even wrote a review, it was nice.
Vgnette my instincts tell me your going to win this. Just my opinion no one get mad. :)
MasterRabbink so why don’t they write more chapters? Wouldn’t that increase the chances of winning? They don’t look at the writing quality’s but the amount of stones they get?
WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL If you started writing on the 16th can you still enter?
This is my story, I hope you like it.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11737011605504505/31506849660466147
Chun Xiaoli was no different from the dreamy men and women, who with their sweat and effort sought recognition for their hard work. She had already entered the world of "men", had civil engineering and now took her Masters in Administration, with her hard work and sweat she built a company with considerable fame in China, she was nominated as the entrepreneur of the year! Finally she was being like those heroines she'd read about in her teens, she had it all, a brilliant career, a loving family, trusted friends, and a man she loved!
She was the hero of her own story!
Everything was perfect in the life of Chun Xiaoli, until a knife crossed her chest and took everything!
When Chun Xiaoli awoke, she found herself reincarnated in a novel she read when she was young, "The Emperor pampers his diabolical consort!"
This is a typical Xuanhuan style web novel, set in Ancient China, the main protagonist is the cold and calculating 2nd prince who was considered the weakest of all five princes who competed to take over the imperial throne of the Zhou Empire.
The typical plot the hero makes of pig to eat the tiger, that kind of thing. This 2nd prince who hitherto is not interested in power, he falls in love with a simple and humble girl, the daughter of a general's house. That is a woman from another world that transmigrates to the body of the deceased daughter of the general's house, she was a teacher of literature and history.
So like every typical plot, the girl wakes up prettier, smarter and with divine ability, like literature, philosophy, painting and the main one was her aura of cultured person from another world. Of course we can not forget that she received a golden finger, that an old grandpa who will teach her cultivation!
Why would it be female FL without a good crop ?!
ML has the treasure of his mother's family and FL has an old Taoist grandpa!
A perfect couple, made by Heaven!
The plot is very good and beautiful, the second prince becomes emperor, after facing his brothers, killing some, exiling others and allied with the rest, the old emperor dies and the suffering imperial concubine, ML's mother, becomes the empress widow ... blabla.
The emperor makes an engagement with the FL, which is already so strong, that it begins to release pheromones and attract other men, the support MLs, who are handsome, rich and influential men.
Then begins the second part of the plot, which is the new Emperor running after the FL, than she refuses to have a marriage with a man who will have a harem, then flees all the time and meets with the various ML support .
But the emperor does not punish her only more and loves her as if she were a precious jewel, in the end the two marry and the emperor bans the law over an imperial harem.
What a beautiful ending! What an interesting ending!
Just forgetting a little detail .... The second prince had a bride, who was imposed by an imperial decree by his father, who belongs to a retired military family, whose patriarch is the emperor's best friend.
So what happened to this bride? Of course she was the villain of the plot!
How would FL be the prettiest and the best, if not the villain scum to compare ?! How would ML prove his love for FL if there was no villain to punish ?!
Then as she no longer had to conquer her future husband, which she was forced to marry, soon she began to focus on FL, thus becoming the most hated villain of the entire novel!
In the end she had a horrible death! She was thrown into the midst of hungry men, she was raped and then used for dinner!
The name of this tragic villain is Ling Mei, formerly of the Ling military family.
Now Chun Xiaoli is this poor, foolish villain!
"Fuck, I your grandmother, don’t need of an man for to live a good life!” Chun Xiaoli said with resolute eyes.
This is a novel in which villains will reign supreme!
It's a pretty much a popularity contest. If you want to win, you need to have a group of readers who will vote for your story. Personally, I write for enjoyment and to challenge myself.
LawCol This story I'm writing to have fun too, I like to write this genre that is opposite to ordinary FL. I like to put my characters against the patriarchal "heroes" of Xianxian.
I do not expect to win, if I win, I'll be lucky.
Thank you for your opinion, that was kind of you.
Take_the_Moon Welp! That is a chapter... This Coming from your competitor for the longest synopsis possible.
PS: You are beating me by 120 words.
Nevertheless, I believe your Synopsis make me afraid...
Everything until there is selling:
When Chun Xiaoli awoke, she found herself reincarnated in a novel she read when she was young, "The Emperor pampers his diabolical consort!"
Then you spent time to describe... the novel... that is content that you could make as chapter.
That is just to build at make the punch... Which sells a lot to people like me who loves uncommon protagonist. However, I will miss it if I am not interested in checking a long summary. I want to close and just read on the halfway reading instead...
"The name of this tragic villain is Ling Mei, formerly of the Ling military family.
Now Chun Xiaoli is this poor, foolish villain!"
You are even use the synopsis in the first chapter... The punch is really great and make me wanted to check, but... that Synopsis will make some people afraid. I don't know it is possible to remove the 'novel content' and make a shorter description? That hide the great punch line.
After the Fuck! That is not important. The punch line is above that.
Take_the_Moon Uncommon MC is less popular. However, the story is always fresh. Only WMW could do that so far being uncommon MC.
Okay chapter 4 is up and I changed the name/pic
Building The Strongest Human Empire
Direct Link - Chapter 4
Joined in the fun too. Just published Reverend Empress. Please check it out. Hope you like and enjoy the story as much i do writing it.
Reverend Empress - The Legacy Path of The Supreme Ruler
There was prophecy in ancient times that a descendant of a God and an Immortal will be born as a mortal with twin-tailed fate in a mortal-ranked world. It was said that he or she will bring either peace or chaos in the God’s and Immortal Realm. Storms of fire and ice. Whirls of water and wind. Stumps of earth with intertwined woods and metal ores spike through space and time. Light and darkness shall converged into his/ her ‘Divine Will’. Who it will be? No one knows. But the one who could tie their fate with him/her is destined rule over all beings along with him or her.
When the Gods and Immortals first heard of the prophecy there was a pandemonium of utter chaos because the Chief Oracle died right after she finished her words. Thus, no one knows when or when ‘the one’ prophecies as ‘the supreme ruler’ will appear.
Many had waited but many millions of years had passed since then, and the prophecy of ‘the supreme ruler’ was soon forgotten by many. Only those ancient and traditional houses were still keeping an eye out but will they find him/her? -This novel is first set on our modern Earth…
Just published the first chapter
I’ll publish more as I can...
I still have a lot of planning and executions though.
Reverend Empress - The Legacy Path of The Supreme Ruler
There was prophecy in ancient times that a descendant of a God and an Immortal will be born as a mortal with twin-tailed fate in a mortal-ranked world. It was said that he or she will bring either peace or chaos in the God’s and Immortal Realm. Storms of fire and ice. Whirls of water and wind. Stumps of earth with intertwined woods and metal ores spike through space and time. Light and darkness shall converged into his/ her ‘Divine Will’. Who it will be? No one knows. But the one who could tie their fate with him/her is destined rule over all beings along with him or her.
When the Gods and Immortals first heard of the prophecy there was a pandemonium of utter chaos because the Chief Oracle died right after she finished her words. Thus, no one knows when or when ‘the one’ prophecies as ‘the supreme ruler’ will appear.
Many had waited but many millions of years had passed since then, and the prophecy of ‘the supreme ruler’ was soon forgotten by many. Only those ancient and traditional houses were still keeping an eye out but will they find him/her? Please check Reverend Empress. I’ve done some editing on it but the format won’t change so I couldn’t do much about it.
Updated everything needed to update so far. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Chapter 2 is now available.
Hope you enjoy reading it. 
