Any and all feedback much appreciated. Thank you!
Chapter 2 released - feedback please?
Damn, man, your story is a piece of Art! I LOVE the style! It's like music to my ears!
Well, you only have two chaps out, so can't say much about the content, but the rest feels high quality to me. The cover is nice, but you should definitely write more in your synopsis! This story deserves more attention, because it reeks of potential!
I will write a review when there is more out ;)
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I especially like the Dialogues, the speech of some characters so far, it sounds like speech of old, let's see how long it will continue though :)
FleetingClouds wow that's amazing thank you so much!
And I get your point with the synopsis, good idea - it was just a throwaway line to submit in time for the writing contest - but you're right it's not really doing it justice.
Thanks again, really appreciate it!
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Lex_George
Which one?
You could also add some tags, you think would fit to your story, to give the reader a better impression/small summary
A release rate is also good to mention, whatever it is, daily, weekly, monthly. If you want to gain a lot of readers at once, several chaps per week is recommended but not a necessity I think. Will just take some time longer to get discovered.
For the start now, I would try and aim for the contest, you will get featured at the main page if won, I think and this will definitely increase visibility to your story. I think you have good chances but still need to bring more chaps out to finish the introduction (charas, world, plot ...)