114
Before long, he reachrd a considerable distance behind the demonic humans.
Before long, he reached a considerable distance behind the demonic humans.
Ultimate Scheming System
115
"How…nhow could this be? How is he able to catch up to us?"
"How…how could this be? How is he able to catch up to us?"
115
"Sysnthesis?"
"Synthesis?"
holy shit, do monster paradise next. it got a lot of them
116
"What? Password?" Xu Que stunned for a second. This shithole requires a password? Damn it! I should have asked that two guys just now."
(please get rid of the quotation mark at the end)
116
However, if you let the spell enter it's offensive phase, the probability will become 100%.
However, if you let the spell enter its offensive phase, the probability will become 100%.
(its)
117
In no time, the spell wall started to distort, as if iy was transforming into the mouth of a blood basin.
In no time, the spell wall started to distort, as if it was transforming into the mouth of a blood basin.
117
"What a close shave! I almost inured the both of you!
"What a close shave! I almost injured the both of you!
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117
"Little Fox, be reasonable. When I touched you just now, how was I to differentiate your chest from your back since you’re so flat? And it wasn’t on purpose. d
Do you have to insult me and call me obscene?" Xu Que stared and rebutted.
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"Little Fox, be reasonable. When I touched you just now, how was I to differentiate your chest from your back since you’re so flat? And it wasn’t on purpose. Do you have to insult me and call me obscene?" Xu Que stared and rebutted.
118
The both couldn’t help but turn their heads and looked at the mountainous spell area of the Thousand Demon Tribe.
Both of them couldn’t help but turn their heads and looked at the mountainous spell area of the Thousand Demon Tribe.
118
More importantly, an ancient one which had been passed down centuries ago was gone just like that.
More importantly, an ancient protective spell which had been passed down centuries ago was gone just like that.
(ancient protective spell)
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Original Infant and Infant Transformation confusion......for the Fox Queen.
118
"I don’t, but I am not blind. You are at the Full Foundation Infant Transformation stage and a beautiful lady of the fox race. You totally suit the position as the Queen of the Sky Demon Tribe!"
it was mentioned in an earlier chapter 115 that
"One of them is the King of our Thousand Demon Tribe, the Tiger-Dragon King. Another one of them is the King from the Sky Demon Tribe, the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox! They have already been in the Full Foundation Original Infant Stage for many years.
which is it?
Original Infant Stage
or
Infant Transformation
so maybe chapter 115 contain the typo of cultivation level.
118
How can you not know this.
How can you not know this?
More confusing in cultivation level of the Fox Queen.
If she is Full Foundation Infant Transformation, why is she in danger when facing the 5 assassins who are Full Foundation Original Infant?
So most likely both the Fox Queen and the Tiger-Dragon King are both Original Infant (full foundation) and will face the thunder tribulation to become Infant Transformation Level 1
123
(change "he was excited beyond words" to "he was angry beyond words" because the context doesn't make any sense if he was excited)
That’s why when Xu Que stumbled upon the "Two Star Alchemist Ability Book" price, he was excited beyond words.
[Two Star Alchemist Ability Book]:
After purchasing and activating, it would cause the user to attain Two Star Alchemist Ranking. He would be able to refine Two Star Pills at a 100% success rate!
Price : 1500 act tough points.
"Screw this!" Xu Que’s lips curled into a snarl. Compared to the One Star Alchemist Ability Book, this Two Star Book was more expensive by a thousand act tough points.
123
"Ding! Congratulations to hots ‘Xu Que’ for activating the Two Star Alchemist Ability Book.
"Ding! Congratulations to host ‘Xu Que’ for activating the Two Star Alchemist Ability Book.
124
"Hm, this damned monkey… He knows how to do everything!" Su Xiao Qi pursed her lips and cleared her through.
"Hm, this damned monkey… He knows how to do everything!" Su Xiao Qi pursed her lips and cleared her throat.
(throat)
124
Can you please accommodate to Xiao Yu?"
Can you please accommodate Xiao Yu?"
125
Xu Que let out a contented smile as he patted Xiao Yu’s tiny skull affectionately and sighed out, "What a good and knowledgeable child!"
Xu Que let out a contented smile as he patted Xiao Yu’s tiny head affectionately and sighed out, "What a good and knowledgeable child!"
(head)
ssound5rs Please do The Strongest Gene and Meltdown System in Eschatology too. These are my favorite novels. =)
125
Xu QUe was elated.
Xu Que was elated.
126
Thousands of dense words appeared before Xu Que, each of them flooded his mind, causing him to feel overwhelmed from all the knew knowledge.
Thousands of dense words appeared before Xu Que, each of them flooded his mind, causing him to feel overwhelmed from all the new knowledge.
(new)
126
They knew that this was way pill refining was supposed to be done!
They knew that this was the way pill refining was supposed to be done!
129
"Then let’s play along, and allow him to step of the stage in a dignified manner.
"Then let’s play along, and allow him to step off the stage in a dignified manner.
(off)
130
"Lightning Evasion PIll!"
"Lightning Evasion Pill!"
131
It’s just that the teleportation device didn’t send that straight to the pool.
It’s just that the teleportation device didn’t send them straight to the pool.
133
He then moaned out, "SHIITake mushrooms, damned this!"
"Speak english." Su Ling’er replied him.
"I meant, this is horrible, I feel like crying!"
(Speak English doesn't make any sense since Su Ling'er would not know English to ask the MC to speak English.............you can change it so that readers can understand it better)
He then moaned out, "SHIITake mushrooms, damned this!"
"Say again." Su Ling’er replied him.
"I meant, this is horrible, I feel like crying!"
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(found proof that the Fox Queen is Full Foundation Original Infant Stage)
Don’t care about them. Wait ‘till I successfully complete my Tribulations and reach the Infant Transformation Stage. Then I shall find seek revenge for us!
chapter 118 (two occasions that need to be changed)
"I don’t, but I am not blind. You are at the Full Foundation Infant Transformation stage and a beautiful lady of the fox race.
"I don’t, but I am not blind. You are at the Full Foundation Original Infant stage and a beautiful lady of the fox race.
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A prideful and dignified Full Foundation Infant Transformation stager. She was definitely the Queen of the Sky Demon Tribe.
A prideful and dignified Full Foundation Original Infant stager. She was definitely the Queen of the Sky Demon Tribe.
133
I have to take my revenge immediately,.
I have to take my revenge immediately.
(get rid of the comma)
141
AFter sometime, the Tribulations still didn’t look like it was approaching.
After sometime, the Tribulations still didn’t look like it was approaching.
143
Although the first wave of Tribulations seemed to have been withstood by Xu Que effortless, the main reason was because of the Banshee’s Veil’s protection.
Although the first wave of Tribulations seemed to have been withstood by Xu Que effortlessly, the main reason was because of the Banshee’s Veil’s protection.
(effortlessly)
143
It almost seemed like several violent waterfalls stacked ontop of each other were raining down lightning bolts upon him.
It almost seemed like several violent waterfalls stacked on top of each other were raining down lightning bolts upon him.
(on top)
6 days later
bump so it can be seen and fixed?
2 months later
Why lmao
8 days later
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Is this your test for becoming a Editor
Hats off Man Hats off
hmm 