Ierrech Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it. I'm a new writer, so I'm struggling with the balance between world-building and action. I've been shifting chapters and scenes around like crazy since I first wrote this a week ago.
The next chapter was actually the first one I wrote, but then I was like "If I were a reader, would I give a sh*t about these idiots running around in the sewer shooting at giant bugs?" So I added two chapters to introduce the main characters, which became four chapters. Right now I'm tempted to add even more, but I'm restraining myself. Gotta get to the action before the audience gets bored :D.