yvxii Thank you so much for the kind words and the constructive comments! I'm a new writer so I really appreciate it. :)

    yvxii I've read it in wn. Thank you so much!!!!! I am really happy to know what/where I could improve. ♥️♥️♥️♥️

      yvxii Thank you very much for your review ! Sorry for the optionnal factors, I forgot to say I wanted them too :x
      I'll try to improve my descriptions by adding those sensory details. It is true that it adds a more immersive side to the text ! Thanks for mentionning that.
      And I'll review all the chapters for the colons, you're right on this point too.

        yvxii Please Review mine (and add everything.;,;. if you have a suggestion for a better synopsis then please notify me... also, I try to have my cover match my synopsis, so I will change my cover asap if I change my synopsis.;,;.)
        Title & Link: "What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
        Please, read at least the first 5 story chapters.;,;.
        (On the latter novel, no need for review)
        Something nice to read: "A Webnovel Poem Anthology"

          yvxii thank very much

          I'll trying to improve in story develop and character design

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