Hi, I've just published the next chapter if my novel.
Any feedback would be much appreciated!

The city of Mithrelle was once a pinnacle of science and prosperity. After the Scouring, a purge of all technology and invention destroyed the city, and all genius was subjugated. Strict control of all creations, whether steam, heat or mechanical was reigned in by the ruling class, and licensed out by the rich and powerful.

Against this tumultuous backdrop, a young, naive horology prodigy is plucked from poverty and obscurity by a terminally ill ruler.

The road to damnation is paved with good intentions.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/11600591306438605

    I won't lie when I say you have a better synopsis than basically all the other original novels and translated novels, IMOFMKIWDY! (If you understood that, you're a certified genius, but you won't so...yeah)

    Maybe I've been reading a lot of bad synopsis or something?

    Anyways, I like your synopsis, I'll read your novel and may or may not get back to you...I'm tired(Its 2 AM), so yeah, it may be tomorrow or something...

      In My Opinion Friendly Mates Know If We Deserve Yodelling? Was I close?

      Haha all good appreciate it, I tweaked the synopsis moments before posting so glad it caught your interest. Let me know how you go! ☺

          Lex_George
          I'll drop a review later when I have more time. Now for a quick impression.
          After reading the first 3 chapters, I find your work very well written. Old-style dialogue and descriptions that almost sent me to the dictionary a couple times. You seem to weigh each word very carefully. Very atmospheric.

          That said, I'm under the impression that the chapters take quite a bit of time and effort to write. Which will make it difficult to get attention on a site like WebNovel. I suggest you also post it on other sites for more viewers and feedback.

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