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NAME: SUPREME TRANSMIGRATOR--AXTON ZAVIER

Martin woke up in a seething rage.
The memory of his father's name leaving the mouth of the assassin tasked with his death was forever etched into the inner parts of his brain.

The man he had trusted with his life, although they weren't that close, Martin had never thought he would be the reason for his death.

But in the darkness that followed, something extraordinary happened. he found himself transmigrated into a new body, in a new world.
A vessel made for his burning anger and thirst for revenge.

He was accompanied on his journey by a strange type of rune, and blessed with an hidden room of power.

In his new life, he realized he wasn't spared from the constant betrayals.

Martin forged his timid heart into one made of boiling furnace, his soul was fueled by the desire to return to his world and pay his father for his crimes.

He took an oath, one drenched in the blood and sweat of his struggles: They would grovel before his feet.

Each breath he took was tainted with the want for vengeance, each step was guided by the inferno that blazed wildly in him.

The path ahead was shrouded in darkness, but Martin welcomed it, for it was the crucible in which he would forge his revenge.

"I AM AXTON ZAVIER, THE SUPREME GOD OF CULTIVATION."

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    Yukina_Miu

    ForerunnerOfSky A review of the first chapter and maybe the last 2-3 chapters would be appreciated, I would like those specifically read if possible because the first chapter is the hook and the newest chapters will decide whether or not it's going in the right direction. In exchange, I'll give you power stones and a review of your first 5 chapters
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          ForerunnerOfSky
          👍 I'm out of power stones but will give it a read and give you my thought and review. Please do the same.

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