Allen_Clay012 thats fine
ForerunnerOfSky
- 21 Feb
- Joined Aug 30, 2022
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The_Drunkencrater Hmmm, I was aiming more for like 'The Raid or Man from Nowhere feeling... so is my writing too tedious and detailed? (not going to lie that hurts a little)
Was the arc at least interesting?
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The_Drunkencrater Heres my review from reading up to chapter 10,
Has a interesting and unique premise, the first person perspective is a bit unconventional but can work, its a bit to lighthearted for my liking but thats personal preference. Action is a little bit dissapointing it doesn't have much detail or depth to the actions, the character's thoughts and motivations are very well written, solid grammar has some good moments of humor. I think it has potential to grow but just needs lots of improvement and eventually you'll get there.
I think currently from the first 10 chapters I would rate it, 3.5 stars out of 5
P.S : dont forget to read the latest 10 chapters of mine, please, preferably from my One Night Arc, chapter 43
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XuXinyang Sure, I'd be fine with you just reading my One Night Arc if that's fine with you and my current chapters; those are what I am most proud of right now, but its up to you I'll read as many chapters as you read of mine.
XuXinyang
Sure!Here's mine (warning the first 18 or so chapters are trash)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505As he said the companies goal is to make money which can lead to particularly predatory contracts, these contracts are designed more for writers from less affluent countries, most contracts (unless you'r very popular, but if you are a popular writer you wouldn't contract with web novel) are not going to make you much money by first world country standards. My recommendation is if you are in a poor country and not making much money, go ahead, but if you have any sort of popularity where you are getting more than a few dozen dedicated returning readers, there are much better options for pay. If your trying to get know posting on every site is advised including webnovel
_EUPHORIA_ did you set the type of novel in the novel writing settings, in tag's you can set it to fan fiction, i think
zeroshyne Sure i'll read a few of your chapters if you can read my latest two chapters
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B_l_a_n_k_2167 yo I read it and left some comments. I don't want to rate your novel low so here's my review
Well written, nothing particularly wrong but doesn't hook my interest in any particular way, it feels like the author is just describing the scene in an elegant way while sometimes neglecting the tone of a scene or the emotions a character should be feeling in the moment, I like the story premise, with a near apathetic Main Character, but I recommend the author to read or perhaps watch examples like Grand Admiral Thrawn who while apathetic creates an atmosphere of intimidation while not being. a bad guy outright while not being a good guy, sort of a neutral chaos which i think your aiming for with Marshall,
drop an honest review of my newest three chapters please,
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XuXinyang Thanks; I leave a few comments and review your novel honestly if you want me to. Have you read my latest two chapters? I took a three-month break after burning out, so I'm worried about the quality after returning.
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Review Swap, can you guys read the the last 10 or so chapters starting from my OneNight Arc? I have quite a few chapters and want to understand how my writing is progressing. I'll read the same amount of chapters as you guys do though, preferably leave some comments if you guys see any mistakes, drop your links in response
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505](https://) XuXinyang ok, but where's your book bro?
I have a good number of chapters, so I would prefer it if you read my last few chapters, starting from my OneNight Arc, its around 10 chapters of reading, I'll read the same amount of chapters you read though so its up to you.
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505panpan_wuv sure I’ll get around to it tomorrow thanks for the comments, I posted the finale to the arc if you wanna check it out, probably my best chapter in the past 20 or so chapters. Very violent,
Yukina_Miu Sure but i would appreciate it if you only reviewed my three latest chapters just tell me if you want me to review your latest chapters or your first few chapters.
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505(https://)
Raphis sure but I would like a review of only my latest chapters, my early chapters aren’t that good and I plan on editing them but I want feedback on my latest chapters [https://m.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505](https://)
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panpan_wuv sure I would like comments only on my latest 3 chapters if that’s fine with you
Here’s the link
[https://m.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505](https://)Dummybeing sure sorry I’m replying so late, ok I added it
Dummybeing Yo! i know its been a while since you reviewed my novel, since we already exchanged reviews. How about I'll give you two powerstones and some comments, and you can read some of my most recent chapters and leave some comments telling me what you think. (I want to know how my most recent chapters are since. most review the first few chapters)
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505(https://)