Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

    WritingInShadow

    Halo interested in review swap and collection swap, but if you can, just comment my first five chapter? Because I don't need review. Of course I will do yours

    Link: https://wbnv.in/a/6ei1Z7a

    In case you can't opened the links, this is my novel title:

    Apocalyptic World: I've got the second system

      Yukina_Miu

      Solastius_Seena

      Aslan_007

      WritingInShadow

      WritingInShadow

      I'm in the process of writing a fantasy romance story titled 'Silver Serenade.' Currently, It have seven chapters, and more are in the works. I would greatly value your feedback and an honest reviews and comments. In return, I'm willing to provide you with an honest review of your book.

      Here the link:http://wbnv.in/a/10i2DcY

        Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
        It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
        If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
        You can read my novel here:
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

        Please read it and let me know what you think.
        Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

          Visionary_M
          If you are interested in a review and collection swap. Review mine. I can do yours. Here's mine
          Summer : a tale of burning desires
          https://m.webnovel.com/book/summer-a-tale-of-burning-desires_27896603300055205
          If you like historical romance you can read other one
          https://m.webnovel.com/book/i-am-secret-lover-of-prince_27643687108162905/ch-2-goodbye-macedonian_74229881524777368?from=detail

            GearGod interested in comment swap and collection swab? this is my novel:

            https://wbnv.in/a/6ei1785

            I'll do yours immediately

            In case you can't opened the links, this is my novel title:
            Apocalyptic World: I've Got the Second System

              Web Novel Novel Ask