Hello everyone. I am a new author and this my first novel (proper novel). Im looking for feedback and maybe review, votes and collection swaps.
It is named: Elegy of shadows. Check it out.
Here's the link: https://wbnv.in/a/e6i2EXb
[Mature Content]
In a world where her birth led to tragedy, Aisha's existence spiralled into a nightmare of blood slavery, her venomous blood poison was sold by her father in the black market. Enduring childhood torment, death visited her four times - a cycle of betrayal by kin and enemies alike. Now reborn for the fifth time, Aisha longs for both retribution and revenge from those who wronged her. Followed by a peaceful death.
But fate's tapestry takes an unforeseen twist when she marries Aditya, her ex-husband's elder brother. This unexpected bond challenges her vengeful path. Will Aisha finally seize the vengeance she craves or face another heart-wrenching defeat? In "Elegy Of Shadows" her tale unfolds, a journey through torment, death, and unexpected alliances.
Excerpt:
"I am after all a mafia's daughter and am about to marry the most feared mafia the world has ever seen, I must be ruthless. " Aisha said pointing her gun at her rapist.
" I didn't do it. " He screamed.
" Not in this life surely, but you did do it to me in my second. You deserve death. You a**hole. " And she shot the bullet at him.
Bang!!
(If you want to do a swap pls let me know and I'll do the same for you. Thank you!)