Hello guys.
I just posted an original story which the protagonist is extremely unique. He will be engaging with other protagonists in another stories. In other words, a crossover.
The story was designed to be capable in integration. He as a traveler, welding the apex power of time and control. However, it was with restrictions of course, or the protagonist will be too overpowered.

I just want to recommend my own main story to at least gain popularity. I want to express it to everyone in an open and honest way. Give a try to read and please comment honestly. Hearing your feedbacks and advices will let me learn more.

I have also a unique tradition of mine. That was expressed through author's words in chapter 3 of mine. I hope you could be curious and give me a view.

    HeartWrench If you don't post a title nor the link, no-one will think twice, they will just ignore your post, or demand one or both of these from you.;,;.

        DeJeL
        Thanks bro. A minor mistake of mine could be major. I will not ever forget it again.

            HeartWrench writing is good. Characters are good. Conversations are good. Flow is good. Setting is good.

            Bad:
            Story doesn't make sense to the reader. Why would male lead cry and be willing to get power at any price?
            Story takes too long to link to synopsis - who is your MC? Why are there zombies in a novel about the Traveler?
            Don't have to explain the passing marks and grades in body text, put a note e.g. [1] and explain it at end of the chapter.

                ImBloo Soon. The story have to build it's foundation first as immediate put of the climactic content will not be in favor for this long term story of mine. It will be long because this is a main story whugh will be integrated with the oncoming stories I will write.

                :)

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