BAJJ Honestly, this is interesting because even at the beginning, readers can expect a dark plot and some action packed scenes in the following chapters. IMO, for readers that read casually, this is a goldmine but..... you know, some people that tends to ask more and mostly rant about some details,(like me, muhahaha) there's just a bit of concern.
- The term Aurora - not all people have any idea about that, you can just do what usual authors or translators do in every update that has some uncommon words. They explain it at the bottom of the chapter. Or, just put a bit of explanation within the chapter like a small dialog.
- Add more content in the synopsis, There are a lot of people that digs for novels that has potential and one of their main basis in liking the literary work is the synopsis. Right?
Context wise, there is little to know about the world, but about portraying the scene, you did a good job.
Writing quality, hmmm... you can treat this comment as nonsense because you know, you knew yourself better. I can only say " Grammatically, you did justice in your work, and your writing style is good, but not up to par in some of those Godly writers" (peace bro!)
I will be expecting some updates in your work then, Have a nice day!