ImBloo
Reviewed. Sorry it isn't a particularly interesting review. Gaming/virtual reality is my most disliked genre in general, so I have a very hard time getting interested in a story about it. Copy of my review pasted below.
Disclaimer: 5 stars given despite whatever I write below. Review is as of 3 chapters read. Also, I don't like gaming/virtual reality novels. I can never get invested in them. Not even the top and best of the genre. So, I'll be leaving that bias out of my review. This leaves my review a bit bland since it only examines the technical aspects of the story.
Writing Quality: 5/5. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes. I wasn't paying super close attention, so there may be minor ones I missed. Or maybe he really had none. Either way, the author has great writing.
Updates: 5/5 as of this review. Novel is a few days old with 7 chapters.
Story Development: 4/5. MC is betrayed. We get to watch as he plots his revenge. Written well. Minus a point for lack of originality by using a super common cliche within the genre. I don't deduct points for most cliche, but I don't even read this genre and know the cliche for MC gamer to get betrayed, then X happens, then he starts planning his revenge and comeback.
Character Design: 4/5. Good emotional descriptions for MC. Minus a point for lack of describing character looks for MC and other characters.
World Background: 5/5. Great opening with the battle, mages, warlocks, dragons, etc. It will probably pull you right into the story if your into gaming novels.