Please review my novel but make sure to do it after reading it. I want honest opinions on my work as honest criticism will help me improve.
It is my first work so please point out grammar and spelling mistakes and review the story.
Feel free to leave some suggestions.

And it is not just about girls and harem. I know the first chapter confuses many but.........sigh :( read the rest of the chapters
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12050576006828905/Bewitching-Eyes

    Panqiuyan yep, I like Naruto, DBZ, black clover, Assassination Classroom, Boku no hero academia, etc.

      reverof I reviewed your Novel since I feel like it's interesting. I hope it helps.

      You don't have to review mine since I'm only giving free reviews in my spare time.

          opolo just read it and I found no mistakes so far i like it the name of my story

          Is Black Blood Family

              Brezze done reviewing your story. The review may be a little harsh but it was mandatory to tell you the shortcomings in your writing.

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