SHIT, why did I upload so fast, just made it 23 chaps. Well, good luck to all the other newbie novels out there. Big sis will cheer for you!

    killermniko If you want to review, then I'll be more than happy! :D

    But if you don't want, then that's fine too.

      Shoot. Mine is 21 chapters 😩 Please if you have time check out mine. Just started a week a go it was my first time and I really really need a real criticism.
      Here's the link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/11911622506604705

      I wanted to improve so the harsher the better. I just had to ready my little heart. Huhu thanks thanks!

        BAJJ Well, I can compromise with that, and since you're the sixth person then I will no longer accept any other requests for reviews!
        Yay (for me)

        I may take some time though to review, but hopefully, by this weekend, I'll get to your novel. :D

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          BAJJ Oh my, you don’t have to act so humble. I know your novel can hold its own weight, with those 150 sprit stones~

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            HavenlyJeep thank you thankyou! Omaygad. I still have time to ready my heart 🙇🏻

              Hyowha maybe because it was kind of light or something but I actually read yours to gained vocabulary words and ya know inspirations. Hehe 🙇🏻Though after I stumble upon yours I felt mh story was kinda trash 🤦🏿‍♂️💆🏻‍♂️

                Nou if there was a follow button here, I'd follow you a long time ago. Felt like I was having a class and always learn a thing or two whenever I read your reviews or comments at other people's work. If you have time please check out my story and I would appreciate any criticism. 🙇🏻 Just a heads up this is my very first story in my entire life so please bear with it. Thank you🙇🏻

                  BAJJ
                  I second this as well!
                  Any opportunity to help me grow, as a writer, would be extremely welcomed!

                  BAJJ

                  Please, if there was a follow button here, don't follow. Things are exciting and important when they're new, but once you've follow and realize I'm singing the same tune over and over again. . . Your opinions might change. Lets not do that. Lets just find each other by surprise on random threads, and then acknowledge that for that one moment, I looked cool. :P

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