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Just picked up the pen and decided to try being an author? Perhaps you aren't confident with what you wrote, or you aren't getting (enough) comments and reviews so you don't know if it's good or not. Being self conscious is actually a very common thing.
Here I am to give an unbiased review of your novels for you. I do one a day, as I have my own writing to focus on as well. I will do a total of five over five days, and those five shall be the first five requested.
I won't be reviewing your novel on whether I consider your story to be good or bad, as this type of opinion is very subjective to just a single person. I will instead focus on identifying issues in grammar, paragraphing, flow, speech, character personality, Story engagement etc... the main points that you will need to focus on in order to take a step forward into improving your writing.
Reviews are long an in depth, so I will only post in on your novel and not here as well, just follow the links to look for it.
Review #1 (Azeal Neralum)(https://www.webnovel.com/book/11632998806449305/Azeal-Neralum) Posted.
Review #2 (Beyond the mask)(https://www.webnovel.com/book/12082205906890205/Beyond-the-mask) Tomorrow
Review #3 (8 Lives of Sins)(https://www.webnovel.com/book/10907220306203905/book-8-Lives-of-Sins) In 2 days.
Review #4 (Legendary.)(https://www.webnovel.com/book/11998741805732105) In 3 days.
Review #5 (Noblesse Oblige: Ascendance)(https://www.webnovel.com/book/11964123705668405/Noblesse-Oblige%3A-Ascendance) In 4 days