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Link: Eye Of The Eclipse

Hey guys! I've been on this site for years and always wanted to try putting forward my own novel... which I finally started last month!

I'm thinking of going straight into a long one and it would be amazing if anyone could take a look at the first few chapters to point out any early writing flaws or bad habits so I could progress while fixing them!

Any feedback would be appreciated, positive or otherwise!

Thanks in advance <3

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