EternalTrials A few pointers. First the title is horrible and confusing. Next there is no image for the book. Then there is a spelling error in the synopsis where you wrote “undistinguishable” it should start with an i not a u. The synopsis was also bland.

The chapter is decent and all but it confused me as you wrote he worshipped devils in the synopsis. So this life of his he as a devil. Now I don’t know about you but devil worship is completely different from people calling you a devil. Usually cultivation novels the enemies of the protagonist label them as a devil and they consider themselves to be as ruthless as a devil. Never have I seen or heard of anyone write about a devil worshipper. Why? Because a devil is a wicked or cruel. They shouldn’t be worshipped at all. your mc gave off an aura of righteousness but he was a devil worshipper? If he was called a devil I’d understand but come on. Go and look at what devil worshippers do in the other novels, TV movies anime etc, and you will understand.

So yeah these are the pointers and tips I have for your novel after reading the first chapter. Your concept is very generic to say the least but I feel like you can do something with it that others can’t. I advise change the synopsis, add an image and fix up first chapter

      EternalTrials a few questions first before I give it a try and be emotionally and mentally invested. : Do you think you are one of those authors that drops the novel after a few dozen chapters? If you are not, are you one of those authors that doesn't want or know WHEN to end the story? Like a thousand chapters after and there is no ending in sight? Coz this is a problem I think with the current novels. 1,600+ chaptersand and ONgoing..!!! I'm thinking that if I start reading this novel, I will be still reading this ongoing till middle age. So, no.

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