DragonKnight531 Honestly if it’s not picking up in 2 months then you should re write it. That’s the least you could do. I had a book up for a month and realised I did horrible so I removed it and thinking of adding another one soon
elliptic
- Nov 21, 2018
- Joined Aug 4, 2018
- In Fantasy
Making sense is a small start friend. I have no idea what you wrote
EternalTrials A few pointers. First the title is horrible and confusing. Next there is no image for the book. Then there is a spelling error in the synopsis where you wrote “undistinguishable” it should start with an i not a u. The synopsis was also bland.
The chapter is decent and all but it confused me as you wrote he worshipped devils in the synopsis. So this life of his he as a devil. Now I don’t know about you but devil worship is completely different from people calling you a devil. Usually cultivation novels the enemies of the protagonist label them as a devil and they consider themselves to be as ruthless as a devil. Never have I seen or heard of anyone write about a devil worshipper. Why? Because a devil is a wicked or cruel. They shouldn’t be worshipped at all. your mc gave off an aura of righteousness but he was a devil worshipper? If he was called a devil I’d understand but come on. Go and look at what devil worshippers do in the other novels, TV movies anime etc, and you will understand.
So yeah these are the pointers and tips I have for your novel after reading the first chapter. Your concept is very generic to say the least but I feel like you can do something with it that others can’t. I advise change the synopsis, add an image and fix up first chapter
@Misguided_Rooster dude me and you are the same. I use to hate reading as a form of entertainment and always thought those people were geeks and stuff. I even thought about anime like that back in the day. I began reading because I got sick of childish anime. Im mainly into like fantasy genres so anime was like the best type. But then the plot armor fro anime was always too thick and ridiculous. Like if the heroine gets captured the enemies wait like 3 days to interact with her and then proceed to rip her clothes off after the mc 'miraculously' finds her in the huge ass country. He then knocks out his enemies and leaves. I seriously hate when an enemy gets knocked out cold and the mc thinks thats enough revenge. So yeah i began to read stuff with plot armor not as thick and an mc that will kill when necessary.
Misguided_Rooster I agree with king ice also. The title and synopsis have not attracted my attention enough to make me read the first chapter. After all this is definitely the most common type of novel on this app
Lord_of_Potatoes Yeah i meant xuanhuan translated novels. Original webnovels i completely understand them being wish fulfillment. But there should be a limit on the wish fulfillment. Im not really fond of novels that have everything falling into the lap of the mc without them working hard.
So I have been reading a lot of cultivation novels recently and goddam it majority of them have the same mc with a different name. If it’s not the same Mc then it definitely is his long lost brother.
Like seriously the Mc has to win every single time? Like no surprises there I knew he wont lose. Idk for me I feel that these novels could be so much better if they added that mystery feel to it. Knowing the mc will never lose a tournament or the side characters never dying makes me lose abit interest. After all I did come from game of thrones so I don’t mind majors dying if it helps the plot.
The cliche plot armor, the shitty harems where the mc flashes his dick size and the cold arrogant proud daughters of heaven flock to him just to follow him. Lol if a female is ever described with more than a few sentences I am certain they are either related to the mc or it is a future harem member.
i want to know why Chinese wuxia novels are all wish fulfilment ? Like these novels can have thousands of chapters yet they are still wish fulfilment. Like I don’t understand why people like wish fulfilment for very long stories. They usually become washed and repeat the same arcs where the mc lover is forced to marry a trash lecherous fella and the Mc comes to the rescue.
If someone could recommend me a novel that has hundreds of chapters without thick plot armor and identical cliche stories.
HoneydewSovereign lol this is talking about a completely new species of creation. There are many types of dragons and phonexis. My dragon and your dragons may be completely different. So unless a concise image appears when you are talking about a certain something then a tangible theory won’t work. For example your dragon could be a large serpent type. Much dragon could be a small winged dragon. Now both are technically dragons. But what makes something a dragon?
you know what I mean.HoneydewSovereign human form is the easiest to manoveur around and gets you less attention. Of course this is all fantasy and there is no scientific evidence that you so desire because I’m sorry to inform you but dragons and Phoenixes don’t exist.
So the best thing I can come up with is that they wish to not garner attention when in human dominated settlements. The other because the world isn’t structured around their gigantic figures. I mean how are they supposed to go inside buildings and stuff.
Susanei I will send a review of yours right now. Hopefully you can review mine also. Will be doing anyone else if they wish just let me know.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/11680482406469805BabyTanuki I don’t mind grammar errors if it’s still readable but if it’s littered all over the novel and unreadable then it’s a problem!
Lukis_Aurelius Honestly I don’t believe it’s either quality nor quantity nor constant updates which is the lack of support. It’s all about the promotions you receive, either a feature which works best, or constant power stones and good reviews. I’m speaking from experience I have a novel out that barely gets views and stones and I am at chapter 31. I have seen novels with 7 or 8 chapters filled with grammatical errors yet they have hundreds of power stones and hundreds of thousands of views. So I think you just have to get your novel out there. I never knew how to get my novel out there as I believed it was a problem with quantity but I believe I was wrong. It’s merely promotion.
So check out my novel if you have time I do daily updates! Throw a review and I’ll send one back also! https://m.webnovel.com/book/11680482406469805
BoredPanda I’ll be reviewing yours my friend hopefully whatever you wrote has some chapters. If it’s under 5 chapters can’t really review
I also have a book out hope you enjoy it and let me know what you think! https://m.webnovel.com/book/11680482406469805
DeliciousFoodEater I 100% agree with your words. Every type of cultivation novel or gaming system novel share the same father. Like we don’t need twins with different names out here. I’d accept cousins and even brothers but twins with different names is ridiculous if you know what I mean. I can name at least 5 cultivation novels that share practically same plot different names. Old powerful man reincarnates into trash and his girlfriend bulls the marriage. Blah blah blah then he is a genius and all. Then comes in the immense plot armor and the little girl which the old powerful man in a child’s body can’t seemingly deal with because he was a virgin in his last life.
Gosh it made me write my own novel because I was sick of dealing with MC who only have different names. My novel of course will have some cliche plots but I will twist it so hard.
Check out my novel and let me know what you think. This one is going to be a long one hopefully and you will not be disappointed. Warning it kinda has slow start.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/11680482406469805/32325859390047888Dontlookdown Yeah I have seen far too many novels with the same synopsis but different names. However this is a story about a youths clan being betrayed and as a result his clan declines heavily and suffers destruction. The betrayal wasn’t aimed at him due to anything he did. It was someone close to him who had deep enmity with his clan and used him to get closer to the clan. so I don’t know if I should spoil who it was to gain potential readers.
N0xiety Common sense literally means sound judgement. The common sense being applied here is to decide someone’s innocence. Now majority of people will have a common belief that if someone hasn’t killed anyone else they shouldn’t be killed. It doesn’t matter if a law states that this person is innocent or guilty. The common belief that humans are born with is that everyone has a right to live. But if you take someone else’s right to live then you similarly should lose your right to live. Don’t go all batshit crazy over someone else’s opinions my dude. We both know that if you see someone else killing people indiscriminately you will consider them to be very evil. Even if they believe themselves to be innocent.