I do not need a review or anything, you story needs a lot of editing. I just read the first chapter and I was having a headache. Perhaps use Grammarly to check for spelling errors or something. If you need help, you can join my discord, that is where my friends critique one another and improve their writing.

Discord: https://discord.gg/BQ73sF9C

    If anyone is interested in a Dark Fantasy Adventure Story, please give this novel a read and add it to your collection if you enjoy reading it... Thanks a lot !!!

    Goddess' Assassin System
    http://wbnv.in/a/03iABmC

      16 days later

      Hello everyone, I wanna share my first book here.

      Sometimes I think that being the Gods is not easy. Humans like to complain about many things and that might be a hassle for the Gods. Then from that thought, I decide to made it into a novel.

      If you like fantasy malebooks, you can check this out. Or maybe if you wanna swap collect and review, just drop your book's link on comment. But I hope you will also be my loyal/true readers. Thank you.

      https://m.webnovel.com/book/be-the-god-isn't-that-easy_28862095608215205

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