Hello. I'm sort of new here, and I've posted the edited chapters of my YA Fantasy novel: 'The Time of Rain'. Only the first 2 chapter are up, but I'd still appreciate any comment/suggestion.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12347366405308605

If you're not into YA Fantasy, I have also posted the initial chapters of Fairly Fair Trades:

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12347514805309005

Please let me know if you're interested in a swap. I'd gladly read your stories, too. Thank you :)

    Forsaken1 Sure :) I'll add your book to my list. My review may take a little while though as I still have to finish 2 others. And no worries about the brutal review. I also tend to be very honest at times. But if it's okay please read my story, 'The Time of Rain' then.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12347366405308605

    As it's currently my main project, I'd love to get the most honest review/critique I could get on this story. Thanks :)

        Clowniac I've added your book into my library and will be checking it out later :) Thanks

            existing Thanks for your review. I'm sorry if I'm still currently reading your novel. I've just finished the first few novels I promised to read, and your novel is already quite long. Sorry if my review for your novel would take a little while.

                existing Thanks :) I just feel bad because I was the one who started this thread. But you even finished reviewing my work faster haha. But thanks for understanding.

                    JA_Anton lol no worries. And btw, you don't have to read all the chapters in my novel. (Don't force yourself) some people only make reviews based on the first 5 to 10 chapters.

                        existing I'd rather read it all though. I've read until the most recent updates for all those I reviewed. Besides I think your story's good.

                            Hallo. I'm looking for objective reviews for mine :)

                            That is, if it's too complicated/boring/etc., please tell me, and if you could also give me tips to spice up my writing, I'd really appreciate it. You don't have to read everything! I have 16 chapters, and most of them are around 2k words long :joy:. If you're not enjoying the story, just read until you form an impression. I'll be going over the books here too and give feedback that you hopefully might find helpful. Thanks a bunch!

                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/12203458605078605

                              WinterBud Hello again :) And thank you once more for your feedback on my two works. Thank you for taking time to read both.

                              And sure I'll be reading your story in a bit. I don't mind 16 chapters, and 2k is a normal chapter word count for books, so no problem. Hope you'll find my feedback helpful as well.

                                Alfwulf Sure thing :) I'll add it to my reading list. But I am still reading one novel now so I'll only be able to review your book later. I hope you won't mind the wait.

                                  Forsaken1 Yeah, found yours here. I also gave one to the others, but you don't have to force yourself to review mine if it came out of nowhere for you :)

                                      WinterBud
                                      It was, but I repay effort with effort.
                                      As you are aware, I am not the best, but I will be honest.

                                      I winter bud- well done your novel was on point. I must bow in admiration. But I still hate you... =]

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