Well... I don't know how the forum works around here (It's my second time opening a discussion, while my first time was more like a question for the staff. I don't usually stay in forums or write in them.) so... i on't know if i'm doing correctly.
But... Anyway, as the title says I'm looking for people to review and give me their criticism about my novel.
Even though some people are reading my novel, they don't comment (Only one person is currently commenting) and neither give me their review, thoughts, and criticism over my novel.
I really want to improve myself as a writer and be able to write all the stories that I have in my head and give the best experience to my readers, but without anyone telling me what I'm doing wrong what I'm doing right, it's hard to improve. I entered the Phenomenal Author contest, but I don't think I'm going to learn a lot...
So... that's it, I would really, really appreciate help with this.
Here's the novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12122078406956805/Starbound%3A-A-Space-Odyssey