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Hey guys. I'm trying to write a new novel and my synopsis is pretty shitty so can anyone tell me how to better it. Thanks

Novel name is : The Crippled System!

What's your synopsis like?

Just another crippled beggar on the street .........or is he, join our MC as he goes from Zero to Hero...........

3-4 chapters a week.
This is it

KDOSSTUDIO
He's just another crippled beggar on the street... or is he?
Join our MC as he goes from zero to hero.

3-4 chapters a week.

To be honest, I think that's slightly cringey a title, but idek, I've seen worse. Just fixed your grammar up a little.
Make sure to capitalize the title, lol.

NihilisticBeauty synopsis

NihilisticBeauty
You got a better title, please tell.

KDOSSTUDIO
Something you should consider putting in the synopsis.
- MC's name
- Who gave him the system?
- What does the system do?
- Why does he decide to be a hero?
- Potential villains / obstacles?
- etc

ImBloo thanks

ImBloo
This better ?
In the narrow streets of the city sits a beggar with only one arm, he is our MC, Lewis.
After being betrayed by the army and left in this state, Lewis wanted his life to END..... however due to plot armor he received a system that would allow him to get his revenge and reach the TOP of this world!!!

3-4 chapters a week.

KDOSSTUDIO Oh, I meant synopsis. The title is nice and simple.

NihilisticBeauty
I am lazy so its hard for me. Also check out the novel
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12588621506024305/33811723710418228
I changed the title to " System of a Crippled Soldier.". Since there was a ready a novel with that name " the CRIPPLED SYSTEM.