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Hi im not new here but i just recently write my very first ever novel. I know that my work is not fantastic as the others and my grammar is worst because english language is my 3rd language. So hopefully you can review my work and tell me my flaws.
Author: anne_2
Title: I'll reach the stars and moon for you
Genre: Romance fiction
Link: http://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12514282106704405
Sypnosis:
His face was so close to hers, that she could see his pure hazel eyes with cold and distant aura. Hesitantly she reached out to touched him the lightest brush of her fingers over his slender fingers yet strong hands and she said “i’m sorry..” yet he brushoff her hand and look her with disgust all over his face.
“....”
“You dare to say sorry and you dare to abort my child”he said with anger flashes in his eyes. He never have thought he will see her here in Singapore specifically in Pan Pacific hotel where his assistant booked for his business trip. Turning his gaze to his assistant “send Mr. Qin at my room when he come.” As he said this he straighten his body and rise from his seat and leave without turning his head to the girl standing beside his table.
The girl clutch the edge of the table as she was confused to what he said.
‘Ah w-what? C-child? A-abort?’”pffft”.
‘Is he crazy? We did the deed once and we’re in influence of alcohol...and as i remember he never liked me more over I’m head over heels to him? and most I’m not preggy right?
Hoping for your comments ang suggestions. Thank you