WedhusSlayer I'm deffinitely enjoying the storyline so far. The first chapter needed a bit less detail, and a little more action, in my opinion, but aside from that, fantastic so far _

                              shrishthi
                              Guessing since you liked my last post that you’re up for a swap, so I’ll get started on yours soon after I finish anothers.

                                  Skittlez9653 I recently read a novel ..... it's quite interesting I like to share the story . I'm bit scared because I am copying the novel..... is it alright

                                      shrishthi
                                      Thank you!
                                      Yours is done too. Just a heads up, my review is rather blunt, so prepare yourself. >< The best of luck in your story! (:

                                          Chryiss thank-you but as a co Author I thought there will be a nice response but it's ok I'll improve myself and come back with my good works.

                                              shrishthi
                                              I always end on a positive note after giving suggestions. I don’t do a review to just to sugar coat and give a good score, no matter how much I like the story or the writer. But in the same way, I won’t give a bad score if it was well written.

                                              Simply from all the stories I’ve read and reviewed so far, this is what I felt when comparing, but don’t be discouraged! Writing a story takes a lot of work and never is really “perfect.” Countless revisions and proofreading is necessary for anyone. Even the most acclaimed authors didn’t get it on the first, second, or third write!

                                              This is only the beginning, and like I said in the review, you already have a clear idea; it just needs some elaboration and brushing up. Keep at it and you’ll get there! (:

                                              Of course, I’m no professional editor, but if you ever need specific help, I’m here to assist as a fellow writer.

                                                Since it seems you can search on tags I guess it's a good idea if we start tagging the stories we review. I'll start doing so myself from now on.

                                                Edit: I mean by using the feature on the novel frontpage.

                                                  ardraammu I don't think that's a good idea without permission directly from the wither. A fan fic is one thing but to actually copy what the writer wrote and post it as your own violates copyright

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                                                      Skittlez9653

                                                      WedhusSlayer

                                                      shrishthi

                                                      Let's swap, all your books sound good, would love to leave a review, tell me if your interested and leave your link with it.

                                                      Title: My brother's friend
                                                      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12373423206351105

                                                      Synopsis: Tang An is a high school student about to graduate. But everything changes when her brother's friend moves in. Battling with trauma from home, she tries to overcome her family challenges but when an unknown secret is exposed, can Tang An survive its consequences or will she die at fates hands?

                                                      Note: Anyone who reviews my story will get one for theirs as well, so send a reply to me if you have and leave your link :). have fun and I hope you enjoy it.

                                                              Nzoputa
                                                              Done writing a review for your Tang An's story
                                                              I hope I'm not too harsh, actually I like your work.

                                                              I leave my link here

                                                                  3 years later
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