Greetings,
This is ExperimentalWriter. I’m asking for anyone who’s interested to take a peek at the first two chapters of my first web novel. I’ve been writing from time to time on several sites for the past few years, but I’ve never received any serious thoughts from readers so far on my works.
I assume my extremely low view count for this novel is due to its bland and dumb summary, but I would say it actually summarized everything pretty well while keeping decent mystery. There’s also the fact that I usually upload late at night for North Americans.
Anyways, here it is:
https://m.webnovel.com/book/13282753706363805
Keep in mind this is only the intro. I want thoughts on how I begin a novel, introduce the MC, my writing style, etc, not on how the plot is structured or how the side characters are written, because I haven’t given you one yet.
TL:DR Review and rate my novel, just talk about how good the intro is.
