Looking for reviews that cover up to the latest chapter (about 290k words). Most people stop reading within the first few or so chapters. A pitfall of the design of my first arc but it’s not like I can change just a few chapters without having to change everything. I have enough feedback for chapters 1-40. More looking for CH 41 - current.

Or you can just comment or provide more reader feedback.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11240222306301505/The-Selection

Genres: High Fantasy, Mystery, Action, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Mystery, Tragedy

    Not sure if just me, but asking for someone to invest 290,000 words worth of time is a big ask...

    What exactly is the reason why people tend to quit reading? Slow build-up? Grammar? Plot and characters itself?

    I read like half of your first chapter and even though it had a few odd grammatical errors, it wasn't horrible by any standard. What's your collection to views? I have a story that's at 135,1k views (meaning they clicked 'Read Now' and read at least 1 word or page), and only 111 collections.

    It's just not that easy to get a huge following, even though it may sound easy because all you see is survivor bias, and you don't see the mountain of other content.

    Again, I would help, but 290k words is a huge ask, especially with what appears to be a first-person-perspective, which isn't my favorite personally.

      Well look at it this way. Over 50% of my readers quit reading after chapter 1 (meaning less than half views on chapter 2) while this isn't exactly completely accurate, it is when there's that large of a gap and happens on every website I post to. Several comments/reviews on RoyalRoadL mention they don't like the MC i.e. sexual assault on the first chapter and such. So probably characters as they are introduced. I use tropes, yes, and while things may seem typical early on there's one thing I do that tropes don't do is provide actual explanation/reasons why a character is a certain way to some degree. Though those reasons don't come immediately.

      As for this website, I have 99 collections. I browsed another thread that mentioned the ratio of view to collection average around 200-250. Which probably isn't true when you consider every single novel, but you know. Still says something. I don't need the collections to tell me what every single website that I've posted to tells me. A steep decrease in views after chapter 1.

      Part of the problem might be in the beginning it seems to cater to the op MC crowd, wish fulfillment etc which people that stopped reading in the first chapters have said, it is by no means a OP MC story or wish fulfillment...but by up to date chapter I'd probably have bled all those looking for that type of novel and also didn't keep much of the crowd that looked for something else.

      But yeah 290k is a lot. I'm just tired of all the bullshit that I've already heard that basically tells me to rewrite the first 40 chapters or a large amount of editing required which I've already done extensively. I don't expect much. I'm still waiting on a review by StenDuring (which I've seen around in this thread maybe he can relate to this post of why he still hasn't finished reading / writing a review) but I think that he just can't bring himself to read it all, hence no review. Honestly, not surprised. It was on a thread on RRL which offered to read up to the latest chapter. He went through at least 500k words in a relatively fast manner before reaching my story.

      The only people who I've ever received detailed input up to the latest chapter or any regular reader feedback at all are some of my stream viewers and/or people who know me in battlerite xd. Most of my reviews on RRL were really from like the first 40 chapters. One guy who read up to date on Quotev wrote a really small paragraph review but eh doesn't tell me much.

      But the main reason why I want something more up to date is probably because I change my writing style in 49, which is another reason why I don't want someone to provide a detailed review about the writing or anything writing wise before reaching that point. Eh. Too much ramble.

        Skywind555 i tried reading it and its really awful, an idiot, naive, no brain mc GG.. seriously chapter 1 is so so but the following chapter makes people go away.. i even need 3 hours to finished 4 chapter of your story because i stopped read other story before i go back to your story to be able to read it... ill try to persist till the end

          Skywind555 finished ch 6 another naive, idiot character seriously the princess already get kidnapped and kill all her guards and she's even happy with it, she got severe Stockholm syndrome

            stopped at chapter 7 the naivety and idiocy stopped me from moving forward, reading your novel kills my brain cells

              Seems about right. Honestly grown numb to the comments pertaining to those chapters.

                Skywind555 Rewieved on the other site. Your main problem is that readers don't fully understand that the MC is a kid at the beginning.

                  StenDuring Yeah I saw. Funny thing you posted 1 day after I made that post up there XD. Thanks for the review buddy.

                  The kid + adult blushing and what not usually probably what throws people off. I wouldn't change it despite that though for my own reasons. Whether that reason is clear to you now that you've read maybe? It's not really spelled out. Pretty much the only time the title actually gives information is the first chapter.

                    Skywind555 I didn't have a problem with it (but then I'm writing a story that has readers invest 50k words before they're safely inside the story).

                    I stated my gripes, but complaints about a pre-teen being naive, well...

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