Nzoputa Review done!

Didn't take long as it was only 6 chapters. My comments are in the novel itself (there were only one or two, I think). Overall, it was an enjoyable read and hope you will continue developing it. All the best, fellow Author. :)

    Miss_Lazy Done

    Your novel has immense potential, though I do understand you are having difficulties with the language. You could try Grammarly (free editing programme) - it's something I use as well to help. I have a huge problem with tenses and plurals. I can see how much you love writing so all the best!

      Nzoputa Thank you so much for your kind words. I just finished reading your book, it was truly wonderful, keep it up!

        Miss_Lazy I would love to read your story. Would you mind leaving me some feedback as well? links

          5 days later

          Nidalee Review done. Please do mine as well. Thank you.

          Like I said in my first post, you don't have to read all 100+ chapters. Just enough to get a feel of it. Thanks.

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