Paladinius

Very creative and fun work, have it in my bookmarks now. I know you're posting multiple chapters a day recently with it, mass release and all. But have you considered editing the chapters with whole lines and such spacing. It would make things a lot easier to read and more attractive over all.

Personally I have to take some long breaks because the wall of texts makes me dizzy.

    Hello!

    If anyone wants to review swap, just @ me.

    This is mine: Reborn: The unexpected twist

    https://m.webnovel.com/book/14442945206446105

    In her last life, Jinhee was betrayed by both her talented bestfriend, Taehee, and her idol boyfriend, Jaehyun, and she realized that when she walked upon the scene of them both kissing.

    Now that she has gotten the chance to be reborn, she made sure to steer clear of both of them and let them have their romance without humiliating herself to a pathetic state.

    Revenge awaits those who wronged her in the previous life.

    A twin sister who bullies her?

    A family who is indifferent to her?

    Prevent the death of only person who cares about her?

    Stop her scheming uncle?

    Find the mysterious and powerful backer behind her sister?

    She was all in for it. Mysteries kept piling up in front of Jinhee, and things were much different from how they appeared in her previous life.

    However, why did it seem like there is something wrong with the plot?

    Was this really the same world?

    Why was her best friend so clingy and weird?

    Why was her previous boyfriend the one
    chasing after her when it was the opposite case before?

    Nonetheless, Jinhee wouldn't let them both change her determination to avoid them, and this time, she won't let herself be ridiculed by anyone.

    A highschool story filled with drama!

    If you take it as usual backstabbing friend and cheater boyfriend story, I'd have to disappoint you since that is too mainstream.


    "I'm chasing you," A certain idol confessed.

    "Don't think you can easily get rid of me," A certain bestfriend spoke out.

      ShinSungmi I can review swap but I'm gonna be frank. I will tell what I don't like in your novel so that you may change them if you like. I don't want there to be any misunderstanding between us. I hope you can be frank with my novel too

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