VILU first thing. I really loved the title. And for giving a review, sorry but a little more chapters would be appreciated. But gotta say A Big Thumbs Up so far

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    _Sha Oh okay. Give me some time to read it. And thank you for recommendation.

    PeachyPearl thank you , I will be updating 4 new chapters soon within coming 2 days . Hope you would be looking forward to it .

    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

    Title : The Arks

    Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

    In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

      yondi Done with the review.
      And I am not doing it for a review in return so it's up to you if you give comments on my work or not.
      P.S. I would appreciate it more if you could just tell me how you felt when you read the story not just based on the set parameters of reviews. Thank you.

        PeachyPearl here is mine though it may not be your cup of tea but who knows right?

        It started with a Transmigration type of storyline and had about 4 series in them.
        It started off with multi genre such as realistic fiction where the first series was action, followed by romance thriller, romance and paranormal supernatural respectively.

        I won't know how to call it in digital terms though but it was a single main character that travels through time and once he completes each series successfully, he would transmigrate into another person in the next dimension and era.

        Do let me know if there's anything I would improve. The synopsis had been changed three times and hope it would pique some interest.

        Here's the link
        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13914700306309005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305607363

        Enjoy reading.

        Cheerio

          I just started writing this and would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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          #The Overlord is Running of Internet Data

          Synopsis-

          Alex Dcosta was your typical isekai protagonist who finds himself waking up in another world. He finds himself in the body of a young boy with totally badass powers.

          But soon his joyful moment last until he realizes in this new magical world, there was no internet and quickly succumbs to despair. He realized the fact that he won't be able to continue to watch his favorite anime series and falls in depression.

          Just when a mysterious being makes a contract who gives Alex back his smartphone from the earth realm.

          But there was a catch, to stream his favorite anime he needed internet but there was none in this fantasy world. Hence there was an app installed in the phone itself which had certain quest posted in it.

          If Alex was able to complete a certain quest from the app, he would be awarded internet data which he can utilize to stream his favorite anime. The difficult the quest, the bigger internet data.

          Join Alex, a hardcore weeb who transforms and bends this fantasy world to his hobbies. Also for some reason, the gods of that realm were out for Alex’s blood.


          Click for the link here

          Cynk_Napp
          Done
          Your prose brought to my mind a quote by George MacDonald, “A genuine work of art must mean many things; the truer its art, the more things it will mean.”

          PeachyPearl

          This is mine

          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303054919

          Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

          Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

          Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

            PeachyPearl

            This is mine

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303054919

            Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

            Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

            Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

              Mine already had 50 chapters, but only a pitiful 9 collections. Really wanted to know where does the problem lies within my novel. Thanks :D

              Title: After School Tuition Centre

              Author: Dreaminh

              Release rate: Twice per day

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13933295405396505

              Synopsis:

              Ahh!

              School had ended and it is time to go home and relax...

              Who am I lying to? I have tuition after school every day, being forced to learn some useless facts with a bunch of idiots with the risk of being killed by a back scratcher.

              You don't know what tuition is?

              Count yourself lucky, but if you are curious…

              Come and join a colourful cast of characters as they give you the most inaccurate representation of what a tuition center is!

              An adventure filled with laughs, love, friendships, perverts, and stupidity. Not so sure about the friendship and love part, but the stupidity and perverts are one hundred percent correct!

              Two new chapters will be published every day. (One in the morning and one at night, so I would be with you the whole day.) :D

                This is mineee! :D Please review it with all honesty and angst, if need be, to help me develope more! But mroe importantly, please enjoy :D

                TITLE: The Summoned Kings
                LINK:https://www.webnovel.com/book/13872092906919505/The-Summoned-Kings
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                Synopsis:

                In the world of modern technology, Day and Night waged war against each other for thousands of years. With the stalemate leaning towards Night's favor, Day took the chance and elected to choose a champion to fight for him.

                Day bestowed divine gifts to many students while delivering them to another world called Yamuna where they were forced to compete with each other and become the ultimate victor.

                Toivo, the ultimate slacker and devoted gamer, was dragged into the competition against his will with little hope for victory, so it came as a shock to him and everyone else when he manifested the superior power of 'command'. Forced to win battle after battle, Toivo struggles to get back to his home so he can laze about and finish his RPG!

                  2 months later

                  PeachyPearl

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                  PiperShea

                  Hello everyone! please help to review my work

                  I'm so tired of Cinderella sisters, with mighty CEO and face slapping. My story is for the calm and silly romantics (like myself 😆)

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                  Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14567282606865905
                  Title: I deserve a second chance
                  Genre: Romance (of course! ヽ(。◕o◕。)ノ. I'm a romance fanatics)
                  Tag: Handsome male lead, Business, Female MC

                  Synopsis:

                  A very handsome guy suddenly told me that he is pursuing me??

                  Shao Yan has been divorced for two years, and she wondered if she can grab this chance at love again?

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                  Please leave me a review, and let me know your book. I will read it and also leave a review for you!

                  Thank you! 😘

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