I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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Human in a Demon's Hide

Synopsis-

I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Hello, author-san here!
This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.

There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.

Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.

There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.

The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.

Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(

P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.

(/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
(Demon's Hide)

Click for the link here

I just started writing this and would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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#The Overlord is Running of Internet Data

Synopsis-

Alex Dcosta was your typical isekai protagonist who finds himself waking up in another world. He finds himself in the body of a young boy with totally badass powers.

But soon his joyful moment last until he realizes in this new magical world, there was no internet and quickly succumbs to despair. He realized the fact that he won't be able to continue to watch his favorite anime series and falls in depression.

Just when a mysterious being makes a contract who gives Alex back his smartphone from the earth realm.

But there was a catch, to stream his favorite anime he needed internet but there was none in this fantasy world. Hence there was an app installed in the phone itself which had certain quest posted in it.

If Alex was able to complete a certain quest from the app, he would be awarded internet data which he can utilize to stream his favorite anime. The difficult the quest, the bigger internet data.

Join Alex, a hardcore weeb who transforms and bends this fantasy world to his hobbies. Also for some reason, the gods of that realm were out for Alex’s blood.

Click for the link here

I just started writing this and would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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#The Overlord is Running of Internet Data

Synopsis-

Alex Dcosta was your typical isekai protagonist who finds himself waking up in another world. He finds himself in the body of a young boy with totally badass powers.

But soon his joyful moment last until he realizes in this new magical world, there was no internet and quickly succumbs to despair. He realized the fact that he won't be able to continue to watch his favorite anime series and falls in depression.

Just when a mysterious being makes a contract who gives Alex back his smartphone from the earth realm.

But there was a catch, to stream his favorite anime he needed internet but there was none in this fantasy world. Hence there was an app installed in the phone itself which had certain quest posted in it.

If Alex was able to complete a certain quest from the app, he would be awarded internet data which he can utilize to stream his favorite anime. The difficult the quest, the bigger internet data.

Join Alex, a hardcore weeb who transforms and bends this fantasy world to his hobbies. Also for some reason, the gods of that realm were out for Alex’s blood.

Click for the link here

Shiksha_Jerath stop spamming!!!!

I just started writing this and would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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#The Overlord is Running of Internet Data

Synopsis-

Alex Dcosta was your typical isekai protagonist who finds himself waking up in another world. He finds himself in the body of a young boy with totally badass powers.

But soon his joyful moment last until he realizes in this new magical world, there was no internet and quickly succumbs to despair. He realized the fact that he won't be able to continue to watch his favorite anime series and falls in depression.

Just when a mysterious being makes a contract who gives Alex back his smartphone from the earth realm.

But there was a catch, to stream his favorite anime he needed internet but there was none in this fantasy world. Hence there was an app installed in the phone itself which had certain quest posted in it.

If Alex was able to complete a certain quest from the app, he would be awarded internet data which he can utilize to stream his favorite anime. The difficult the quest, the bigger internet data.

Join Alex, a hardcore weeb who transforms and bends this fantasy world to his hobbies. Also for some reason, the gods of that realm were out for Alex’s blood.

Click for the link here

noctiferu Thanks a lot :D

I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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Human in a Demon's Hide

Synopsis-

I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Hello, author-san here!
This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.

There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.

Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.

There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.

The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.

Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(

P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.

(/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
(Demon's Hide)

Click for the link here

I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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Human in a Demon's Hide

Synopsis-

I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Hello, author-san here!
This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.

There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.

Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.

There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.

The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.

Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(

P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.

(/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
(Demon's Hide)

Click for the link here

I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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Human in a Demon's Hide

Synopsis-

I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Hello, author-san here!
This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.

There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.

Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.

There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.

The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.

Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(

P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.

(/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
(Demon's Hide)

Click for the link here

I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Click for the link here

Yuyumamoru
Hahaha! Thanks!
well I been through that, hence the phrase :D

I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

Any type of constructive criticism would be helpful. This noob writer would be thankful if you drop by...Thank you!
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The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

Any type of constructive criticism would be helpful. This noob writer would be thankful if you drop by...Thank you!
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The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

Someone would be kind enough to give me some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

Hey there! I am a newbie writer! Although I don't have much skill in writing and any type of constructive critiques is gladly welcome, that is if you have time to spare..... THANK YOU!!!

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

Please check out my novel and drop some feedback so I could improvise! thank you!

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here

The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

Synopsis-

I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

Click for the link here