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Hi,
Please give an honest review of my book as I'm a new writer. Also, help with the suggestions or the changes I can make in my writing.
Novel: H.O.P.E Hold on pain ends.
Brief introduction: Abigail Carton is a 17-year-old college student with excellent grades, friends and sweet boyfriend. She has always organized the things planned and time outed until she met a Tyler Morrison who changed her life plans completely.
Warning!!
The book has many swears and mature contents.
This is my first book to do love and support me. Every suggestion is welcome. Do not judge the book by its grammar. Please ignore the mistakes.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12822948605522805/34421444783948048/H.O.P.E/1.-In-the-beginning-it-was-all-black-and-white