LIght_Novel_San Just finished yours! The chapters were a lot longer than expected, but I have to read all to write the review! (also can’t update it like RR too lol) Whew~! I wrote a little longer than expected. Hope anything I said was helpful! (:

Oh and as a note, I sorta talked about it in my review, but I didn’t mention this. Auxiliary chapters don’t count toward the total word count. While this is more important for contracted novels and contest prompt submissions, it still might be better to make them normal story chapters.

    LIght_Novel_San Woke up to your chapter comments, a nice surprise XD

    I’ll get to commenting myself soon, and they’ll probably be longer given the length of each of your chapters. x)

        Hi :),
        I was wondering if you are still open to review swaps.

        Thanks.

          LIght_Novel_San Just left several comments per first four chapters. Sorry for the delay, I was busy with rewrites and other review swaps >< But I couldn’t break my promise, so I was able to comment some today. :) Also, I was glad to see others comments appreciating the amount of thought you put into the human conflicts!

            LIght_Novel_San..... I just went to read and imagine my surprise on only seeing the prologue.. I'm curioussss. The start was really good.

                8 days later

                Here is mine. "My way to you."

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/12021185405774505

                About a girl name Ariana who was sold to a brother at the age of 12 by her jealous mother. Do to a blow to the head she unlocks her power and memories of a past life and decides to change the sex industry by making it into a maid cafe. It is her adventure of finding out who she is, where she came from and why she died in her past life while trying to stay out of the hands of the church who are abducting people who have jewel like eyes, trying to controls her blood that comes to life, fighting to keep her love, and trying to walk the right path or else be destroyed by the Lumas, the very creatures she gave life to.

                Also Hinder-Rella this one is completed.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005

                Twist in Cinderella, there is a lot of growth with all the characters. FL is not a let's wait and see type of character but rather someone who is willing to fight for her right while the ML is loving, protective and supportive.

                  20 days later

                  If you want to swap reviews, just leave a review on the novel for the link below and I'll review back :)
                  The same works for comments too.

                  Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13851990206750205/Xi-Lian-%3A-Queen's-Path-of-Life

                  Title: Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life

                  Release Rate: Once per Day

                  Synopsis:
                  "My little Xi family's precious jewel, what do you want most in this world?"

                  “I want to go to school!”

                  “What?!?” The old man staggered back with eyes wide.

                  “That’s right! I want to go to high school!”

                  “Nonsense! Why would you want to go to high school?”

                  She can speak twelve languages, bungee jump off Mount Tai, face-slap those so-called masters, steal a katana off a ninja, and perfectly use those knives and guns.

                  Xi Lian comes from the elite of the elite. She's beautiful, a genius, and comes from money! The epitome of perfection!

                  But what happens when she wants to go to school? Her grandpa chooses an elite school for her, filled with eccentrics and geniuses. She couldn't go to a normal school like she wanted to. Which makes it even more fun! Because after that is when all her fellow geniuses hail her as queen!

                  .....But grandpa has some conditions..

                  “Number one, you aren’t allowed to get too close with boys, you understand? This is the most important!”

                    23 days later

                    Anyone wants to do a review swap.

                    Here's my novel
                    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605

                    Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

                    Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

                    Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

                      9 months later
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