ShinSungmi read 7 chapters and left a review. I hope you won't be mad since I posted paragraph comments on the more glaring mistakes. Regards

      LaziGamer review swap?

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      Title: The Arks

      Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

      The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

          Minitabs I read one chapter so far. You really need to get an editor or at least a tool that fixes grammar mistakes. Grammarly for instance. You also need to decide if you will use the present or past tense. Otherwise, it started ok but really can't say anymore after one chapter. Will read more when I have the time and will leave the grammar comments out of the review since I am pretty sure you are aware of your lack there, Regards

              KageMugen Thanks for your comment, yeah, I'm already aware of it and I'm working on it, trying a new tool. I will see if it's sufficient! I'm on yours, for now, seems great so far, few words missing here and there but not impacting the whole comprehension!

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